My first photo post

johnny_rino
Posted 02/07/2007 - 11:35 Link
Hi All,

Please see below my first photo post.

http://homepage.mac.com/johnnyrice/myphotos/PhotoAlbum25.html

What do you think?[/img]
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Rodger Fooks
Posted 02/07/2007 - 11:57 Link
Nice and sharp for that speed hand held. Well done.

Like the branch and bird but all the blank space is very confusing. IMHO Try cropping to just the bird and branch and leave a little space on the left.

BTW pasing the full 5mb file is a bit excessive and takes a long time to download on slower bb circuits. If you post 800x600 size images they will be much faster to load and just as good to view.
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johnny_rino
Posted 02/07/2007 - 12:12 Link
Thanks for the advice Rodger I've now updated with a smaller file.
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Mannesty
Posted 02/07/2007 - 12:36 Link
An excellent shot that I think would be improved if you made it a portrait (instead of landscape) and lost half or more of the left hand side. Too much void in my opinion. Shows off bokeh nicely, but detracts from the main subject.
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johnny_rino
Posted 02/07/2007 - 13:50 Link
Now cropped as suggested by Mannesty.

Thanks for the tip!!
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Rodger Fooks
Posted 02/07/2007 - 14:14 Link
Much better - I like the new one
Old wood best to burn, old wine to drink, old friends to trust, and old authors to read.
Mannesty
Posted 02/07/2007 - 14:23 Link
Me too. Much improved composition in my opinion. Can I also suggest you play with the contrast to remove some of the 'milkiness' (I don't know the proper terminology). If this was taken recently, the robin's breast ought to be much more red in it's summer plumage, which I think you can achieve by adjusting contrast/vibrance/saturation.
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johnny_rino
Posted 02/07/2007 - 14:41 Link
Adjusted levels and curves.

I do think this looks much better. Thanks for the tips!
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Mannesty
Posted 02/07/2007 - 14:55 Link
I agree, the image has much more 'punch' without being 'over-processed'. You ought to be very pleased with the end result.

Out of interest, did you shoot it RAW, or JPG? RAW gives you much more post-processing latitude for adjustments.
Peter E Smith - flickr Photostream
George Lazarette
Posted 02/07/2007 - 17:23 Link
Quote:
Adjusted levels and curves.

I do think this looks much better. Thanks for the tips!
Yes, it's now a very nice picture. The range of green tones contrasts nicely with the reddish breast.

He's a rather scruffy little blighter, though.

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petekd
Posted 02/07/2007 - 18:09 Link
Quote:
Nice and sharp for that speed hand held. Well done.
Depends on your definition of sharp

I see this image as sharp http://k43.pbase.com/o4/42/267742/1/61519375._DSC3622web.jpg
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johnny_rino
Posted 02/07/2007 - 20:43 Link
Yes the image was shot in RAW (PEF).

Hi Petekd,

thats an amazing photo did you shoot it yourself?
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MattMatic
Posted 02/07/2007 - 21:05 Link
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I see this image as sharp
Sharpened Very much so.

Knowing how to sharpen images, and especially for web view is an art in itself. From that image you cannot really tell the sharpness of the lens.
Matt
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