My first nature photo

spaceraider
Posted 22/07/2007 - 08:53 Link
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K100d kit lens 1/125 f5.6 critique welcome.
justgetoutandride
Posted 22/07/2007 - 09:18 Link
I suggest cropping out the other flower head and filling the frame with the insect. At the moment there are two things vying for attention.

Also, it doesn't seem very sharp.
Please call me aj,

I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)

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Tyr
Posted 22/07/2007 - 10:05 Link
Yeah, seems a bit out of focus...
confused
Posted 22/07/2007 - 11:24 Link
I like the light and detail on the wings and the insect is definately the most interresting bit so a crop down to the insect and the center of the flower would make it more striking.

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