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mikew
Posted 30/11/2009 - 10:58 Link
I wonder if this would have been a better competition entry?

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thoughton
Posted 30/11/2009 - 11:12 Link
I think I prefer this one to your comp entry. The strong diagonal and greater depth make it for me. In your comp entry I didn't really 'get' the white arrow and yellow lines.
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Dr. Mhuni
Posted 30/11/2009 - 11:14 Link
Hard to say - I quite like both. I think that in each case, though, better lighting would have lifted them to another level. You said it was a grey day and in both shots, while the composition's excellent, the colour is rather flat.
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mikew
Posted 30/11/2009 - 11:17 Link
Boy was it a grey day and this is an alley that runs steeply uphill between two Victorian warehouses so it gets little enough light anyway.

In the competition entry I just like the colours and shapes but the arrow was a fake wall demarcating car park spaces. Kiddy trying to go upmarket I suppose

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Aiki
Posted 30/11/2009 - 20:16 Link
I must agree with Dr. Mhuni.

I miss colors.I really do. The warmth coming from the sunlighted bricks...texture....
The winner was Winner for me because of the light and colors !

Ok, Ok, maybe I just miss sun itself
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mikew
Posted 30/11/2009 - 20:19 Link
I will go back when the sun is there (if ever)
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Prieni
Posted 30/11/2009 - 20:40 Link
I do like the composition and there certainly is something in it. I tried a little variation on it:

[IMG]http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t5/Prieni/mikew_alt.jpg[/IMG]

But I'm sure it's better to go there again when the light is a bit more favourable.

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mikew
Posted 30/11/2009 - 21:00 Link
I'll go for the light I think. To be honest I'm surprised and pleased it's attracted any attention really
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Hyram
Posted 30/11/2009 - 21:03 Link
I think it would have been a better choice.

It is a strong composition just lacking good lighting
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mikew
Posted 30/11/2009 - 21:52 Link
I found it surprising that I could get 4 or 5 shots on a single topic in one 2 hour walk that I'm not ashamed of. OK none of them are earth shattering but it shows what a purposeful walk can achieve. I was determined to get an entry for the weekly and only had one chance for it.

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Dr. Mhuni
Posted 01/12/2009 - 11:26 Link
While I think you're right about the light, it's amazing what you can extract from a photo Ralf. I wish I had your pp-ing skills! What did you do here?
Mhuni

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Edited by Dr. Mhuni: 01/12/2009 - 11:27
Prieni
Posted 01/12/2009 - 12:05 Link
Mhuni,

I basically did a very similar thing to my 5th post in this thread (Venice II). That is, load into Corel PhotoPaint, apply local equalization (I think the radius was something around 100). Then put the new version as a new layer over the old one and use soft light as the layer mode.
I put another layer with soft light on top of that and painted the light parts of the "handrail" over with black.
I think that was it. All in all perhaps five minutes.

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thoughton
Posted 02/12/2009 - 08:40 Link
That is really quite an amazing effect Prieni. Some of those bricks in the lower left and upper right look completely different to the originals. I don't just mean that they look superficially different, darker or brighter etc. They look like different bricks! Different colours and tones, and even textures! Amazing.

Now to find a Mac app that does this local EQ thing
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