MGB - 81 An Abstract

Hyram
Posted 18/08/2009 - 20:47 Link
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Posted 18/08/2009 - 22:09 Link
Hi Hyram

To be honest I'm not sure about this one, being viewed on a small monitor I don't think the size does it justice, if it was about 12' x 4' on a gallery wall I think it would have a stunning effect. Good excuse to buy myself a bigger monitor me thinks. Still interesting and a brave post though.
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Hyram
Posted 19/08/2009 - 09:16 Link
I take your point about the size but hopefully most people can visualise it as a large poster

My work monitor is 24" which is quite handy on occasions.
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mikew
Posted 19/08/2009 - 09:28 Link
I can't appreciate the effects that's been applied to the shadows at this size so it also lacks impact for me as well. I can't say I like the effect I can see and I'm not sure that having that strong horizontal towards the bottom does much for the composition. The diagonals at the top also look a bit 'forced' if that makes any sense.

I'm sure it needs to be bigger. I have a big monitor so can you post a link to a larger image?

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Hyram
Posted 19/08/2009 - 09:40 Link
Mike,

Thanks for the comments.

I will post a link when I am home.

The only effects that have been applied are conversion to black and white (although the original is grey and grey), tweaking of the contrast and the application of a bit of tone.

The rest is as taken at water level (apart from cropping) with the various diagonals and horizontals all as designed during the second world war.
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mikew
Posted 19/08/2009 - 09:43 Link
I'll be curious to see a larger version. You'e letting work get in the way of posting images - tut not the right attitude
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Edited by mikew: 19/08/2009 - 09:43
Daniel Bridge
Posted 19/08/2009 - 13:48 Link
Hyram wrote:
The only effects that have been applied are conversion to black and white (although the original is grey and grey), tweaking of the contrast and the application of a bit of tone.
Surely you've used a PS filter like 'Poster Edges' too? Or is the posterisation just a result of the contrast change?

Dan
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Hyram
Posted 19/08/2009 - 13:55 Link
Dan,

You are right, I did use a filter of some description but I can't remember which one, hence I used the phrase "the application of a bit of tone"

The original is just two tone camouflage grey (to match the usual colour of the English Channel) so the filter applied seemed to fit in with the camouflage theme.
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Malo1961
Posted 19/08/2009 - 14:11 Link
Hi Hyram,

I can see the abstract, I also can see it work in B & W. But........the posterisation kills it for me. It has a lot of potential, the original file that is.

Martin.
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mikew
Posted 19/08/2009 - 14:39 Link
I thought it was solarisation and I felt it killed it - at this size anyway.

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Malo1961
Posted 19/08/2009 - 14:55 Link
My bad....... But the feeling stays I would lie to see the bigger version also.

Martin.
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mikew
Posted 19/08/2009 - 15:08 Link
I have to be honest and say I don't know the difference between the two. In the good old days I did solarization in the darkroom but on reflection I can;'t think why. You sometimes got a nice effect but that was the exception really.

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Daniel Bridge
Posted 19/08/2009 - 15:27 Link
I believe when something is 'solarized', some of the bright tones will turn dark, so think of a shot of the sun, where the disk of the sun would be black but the sky around would still be pale. Posterization is reducing the steps between tones, so that rather than a smooth gradation from dark to pale, we see distinct steps, as with Hyram's photo.

Hyram, I took 'a bit of tone' to mean a bit of colour, I thought it must have had a slight tint that I couldn't discern.

Dan
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mikew
Posted 19/08/2009 - 15:37 Link
Thanks Dan.

Mike
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Daniel Bridge
Posted 19/08/2009 - 16:02 Link
More accurate description of solarisation here - I had the gist of it...

Dan
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