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I is my favourite, nice lighting and great texture and contrast on the building - well spotted and a lovely image - can it be straightened a tiny bit leftwards? And I'd give a small exposure reduction, no more than 0.5 stop.
2 works very well - love the deep dark floor disappearing to black in the foreground and it gives a very mysterious tone - beautifully framed also ... could you correct the vertical distortion, looks like the building is being stretched apart.
I'm afraid the mono church ones don't have any impact on me really - weird effects on the first, and the other is fairly dull IMO. Thanks for sharing an interesting set again!!
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David
can't correct lens distortion with manual lenses unfortunately
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No1 is good but needs a tiny straighten on the door frame. I am one of those that can't stand wonky picture frames though so it may be just me!
No2 'Hint of potential menace', is spot on. Yes there is distortion but it made me look longer and added to the feel.
No4 As Gartmore suggests drop camera position. Also level the camera to control the diverging verticals of the two church ends to get them parallel. May mean you get a lot of grass but you can crop that out. Shots like this with lots of vertical lines can be difficult with a wide lens.
I have to go against the flow here and say I love the third one. Yes it's surreal, but that's what makes it so good. The other three are all nice shots, but don't hit me in the eye like that third one does.
Regards
David
#3 for me. Doesn't look realistic. But so what !!
David
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PS: Just read the addition about #3 being taken on a mobile phone. Oh dear, are these things are going to be death of proper cameras?
A great set.
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