Lanzarote

gartmore
Posted 24/09/2014 - 18:26 Link
I'm just getting around to looking at recent holiday pics.

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Ken
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McGregNi
Posted 24/09/2014 - 19:02 Link
Ken, you're clearly setting out to provoke me there ... I love the composition and the contrasts, textures as well. But please, where's my blue, green, yellows, oranges and everything else? This just NEEDS them all please ! ....

Probably deliberate again, but I think we need a little more room at the very top, and quite a bit less of the right side.
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Edited by McGregNi: 24/09/2014 - 19:04
gartmore
Posted 24/09/2014 - 19:28 Link
Sorry Nigel, I wasn't shooting in colour. As you say its about contrasts and textures
Ken
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McGregNi
Posted 24/09/2014 - 19:49 Link
Yes, the contrasts and textures are all there, but to me, this particular scene demands the colours, it seems to scream them at me! But, of course, for others it will be different ... Aren't we so lucky now to so easily have both.
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bwlchmawr
Posted 24/09/2014 - 20:10 Link
Good strong shapes. Unlike Nigel I don't need colour. This is fine as it is. But he's right: the composition is far too tight at the top. Very easily remedied in this instance.
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davidstorm
Posted 24/09/2014 - 20:46 Link
I like this Ken, I agree that it doesn't need the colours. You've nailed the composition and the exposure, the result is a very pleasing image.

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bforbes
Posted 24/09/2014 - 23:00 Link
All I would change is the stray branch.

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