Landscape Critique please
I think you need to avoid the clipping the edges of the main subject, which happens at the bottom of the frame. Also, I would entirely remove the upper part of the image as this doesn't add anything, only serving to distract.
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No idea really but it just aint right for me!
Pat
I like the background as it serves to emphasise the depth of the field.
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Im disappointed with the opinions as I liked it!
I appreciate your honesty
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I would crop away most of the trees at the top of the shot.
You've kind of got two ideas merged into one shot. The photo would probably work with either no foreground object, showing the path, or move the foreground object up and really make it the centre of attention.
Great components, setting, lighting and treatment. Just needs a bit of planning around composition and what you're trying to show/say.
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Philip
Or crop off the barley section of your image and have the path leading into a dark fuzzy mysterious woodland.
I can't offer too much as this is the dilemma i am normally in and looks very much like the sort of image i have been producing lately.

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what do you think of this?
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