Inner City Ride

paulyrichard
Posted 09/05/2009 - 17:04 Link
Inner City Ride

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"All the technique in the world doesn’t compensate for the inability to notice." - Elliott Erwitt

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Edited by paulyrichard: 09/05/2009 - 17:13
Snootchies
Posted 13/05/2009 - 19:19 Link
I really like this Pauly. Have you thought about black and white at all?
Bob

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TonyM
Posted 13/05/2009 - 21:41 Link
I think Pauly is a master of the black and white (if memory serves me well!) It is a good image - personally, I would crop the bottom off just below the taxi. Allow enough of the grafitti into the image, but concentrate on the colours. The panoramic crop would also give more sense of direction to the cab moving across the frame. I can't help thinking that the "230" in the top left could somehow be turned into the focus, although I've no idea how...
paulyrichard
Posted 13/05/2009 - 23:31 Link
Thanks guys.

Bob, i'm thinkin' about B&W all the time, I love B&W.
I have checked it out in B&W, but it don't really work for me in this case.

Tony, I take onboard what your sayin', maybe a little more off the bottom, i'll try it out.
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Snootchies
Posted 14/05/2009 - 19:40 Link
Yeah I must admit...i'm very partial to B&W too........
Bob

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