help me please

It's been a truly 'orrid day up here- I have hardly been outside- so I have been indulging myself in fiddling with your draft article- 'umble apologies. My 'orrid efforts do not bear exposure to public view, and of course I shan't be surprised or in the least offended if you just hit 'delete' with a suitable expletive but feel free to adopt anything from it if you find any of it useful
So PM sent!

I like it Shaun

It shows how difficult it is as of course it is subjective and with word limits it is impossible to cover everything so something 'could' always be added - perhaps you could talk them into allowing you to write a series so that you could cover single areas in more detail

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Well done Shaun, the article looked good to me, just the right level to pitch it given the amount of words you used.

Regards
David