Framed by a chair
Posted 20/05/2014 - 16:58
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Great picture. Using the chair as a frame has really worked and her expression leaves you guessing how she's feeling at that moment.
I like both (can I say that?)
I like both (can I say that?)
Steve
Sometimes I'm serious and sometimes not, but I consider sarcasm an artform. Which is it today?
Sometimes I'm serious and sometimes not, but I consider sarcasm an artform. Which is it today?
Posted 20/05/2014 - 20:12
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I prefer the colour ( slightly ).
I would darken the chair bokeh and her top by around a 1/2 stop though so the eye is drawn more to the face
I would darken the chair bokeh and her top by around a 1/2 stop though so the eye is drawn more to the face
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Posted 20/05/2014 - 21:03
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Smeggypants wrote:
I would darken the chair bokeh and her top by around a 1/2 stop though so the eye is drawn more to the face
Thanks, that makes sense. I think that LR5 has quite a good local adjustment feature that could do this but I've never used it in anger (still learning Lightroom).I would darken the chair bokeh and her top by around a 1/2 stop though so the eye is drawn more to the face
EM
Posted 20/05/2014 - 21:03
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Colour for me I'm afraid, leave black & white for the oldies, treasure every nuance of colour,
Posted 20/05/2014 - 21:17
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Epithet Man wrote:
EM
yes that's exactly what I'd use. Dial in a negative exposure, you could add some negative clarity as well. All helps with the depth. Smeggypants wrote:
I would darken the chair bokeh and her top by around a 1/2 stop though so the eye is drawn more to the face
Thanks, that makes sense. I think that LR5 has quite a good local adjustment feature that could do this but I've never used it in anger (still learning Lightroom).I would darken the chair bokeh and her top by around a 1/2 stop though so the eye is drawn more to the face
EM
Dial in a feather of about 60 and paint on where required. You can always erase areas and adjust settings post brushing too.
I use the LR Local adjustment brush extensively. I'd hate to be without it. It's THE tool for making pics pop :thumb:
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Posted 20/05/2014 - 22:20
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The colour one for me, it has so much vibrancy and life to it. The image works well and there's good advice here for improving it still more.
Regards
David
Regards
David
Posted 21/05/2014 - 05:07
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Posted 21/05/2014 - 12:28
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Smeggypants wrote:
I had a quick go in Lightroom.
Nice - thanks. Not the only things you changed, I see I had a quick go in Lightroom.
I find the way the hair in the bottom right of the image "pops" from the bokeh of the chair is a bit odd but I left it as I couldn't work out what to do about it.
EM
Posted 21/05/2014 - 15:14
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Epithet Man wrote:
Yup I did a few more local adjustments. Smeggypants wrote:
I had a quick go in Lightroom.
Nice - thanks. Not the only things you changed, I see I had a quick go in Lightroom.
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I find the way the hair in the bottom right of the image "pops" from the bokeh of the chair is a bit odd but I left it as I couldn't work out what to do about it.
EM
I'd leave it. it only gets annoying if you concentrate on it
I find the way the hair in the bottom right of the image "pops" from the bokeh of the chair is a bit odd but I left it as I couldn't work out what to do about it.
EM
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Posted 28/05/2014 - 23:26
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I'm with Smeggy.. I prefer the colour one .... slightly.
Lovely shot and like the natural expression.
Lovely shot and like the natural expression.
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Do you prefer colour:
or black and white?
Comments/criticisms welcomed. I've not shared any of my images anywhere for a long time due to strict self-censorship, but after reading some recent threads on the forum I've decided to start sharing a bit more (with the selfish aim of improving of course ).
Thanks for looking,
EM