first shot at sunrise comments please
Posted 17/08/2009 - 13:29
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Emma. I can see what you are trying with these pics. I don't think you have succeeded very well. The sunrise is the focal point. There is too much else and I would attempt to crop the views so that the sunrise becomes the point at which you focus on when you look at your pics. I like the first one best. It has the atmosphere and magic of a sunrise and that lovely sense of awakening that a sunrise evokes. The size of your pics does not help. About half size would enable the viewer to take in all the shot without having to scan the pics for all the detail. Hope this helps and that I have not been too much of a downer.
Posted 19/08/2009 - 17:40
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The second for me!
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