Fife as promised

davem
Posted 20/09/2010 - 21:54 Link
Well we had a good week in Fife, slightly grey and damp. No crab snadwiches as the sea was too rough for the boats to go out!

Here are three shots

[IMG]http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb316/davem_08/snail-stacking.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb316/davem_08/cleaning-windows.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i210.photobucket.com/albums/bb316/davem_08/st-andrews-castle.jpg[/IMG]

Comment and constructive criticsm welcome.

Dave
womble
Posted 20/09/2010 - 22:32 Link
Take your next holiday in the south of France?

More seriously though, I'd be tempted to tweak the brightness and contrast a little on the second shot, and the horizon may be just a touch crooked on the first. Both, however, give a good feel for the foul weather

Best wishes, Kris.
Kris Lockyear
It is an illusion that photos are made with the camera… they are made with the eye, heart and head. Henri Cartier-Bresson
Lots of film bodies, a couple of digital ones, too many lenses (mainly older glass) and a Horseman LE 5x4.
DrOrloff
Posted 21/09/2010 - 00:21 Link
I like the second shot, although everything does lean a little. Those must be damn good windows. I can commend France. September has been glorious here, forecast is 27deg.C tomorrow.
womble
Posted 21/09/2010 - 12:00 Link
I had a quick play with the second one. I used levels to brighten it up quite a bit, then an adjustment curve to increase the contrast and a BW conversion layer. It worked rather well apart from the sky going all blocky when I tried to darken it down a bit and make it more threatening due to working on a lo-res jpg. With the original file and a few quick tweaks it will be a very nice shot.

K.
Kris Lockyear
It is an illusion that photos are made with the camera… they are made with the eye, heart and head. Henri Cartier-Bresson
Lots of film bodies, a couple of digital ones, too many lenses (mainly older glass) and a Horseman LE 5x4.
davem
Posted 22/09/2010 - 19:21 Link
Drat the crooked horizon!. I am sure I must lean over when I take pictures! Even worse i don't notice it before I posted. ore haste les sped

Thanks for the comments I will have a play around with the elements knobs.

Dave
Utopia Poppy
Posted 22/09/2010 - 19:37 Link
I agree re comments on the second shot, which is my favourite of the three - you've captured real drama in those breaking waves!

Fiona
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davidtrout
Posted 22/09/2010 - 22:41 Link
No 2 is an arresting image. The others have already advised you on how to make it even better.
David
fatspider
Posted 22/09/2010 - 23:26 Link
Quote:
No crab snadwiches as the sea was too rough for the boats to go out
Didnt they have any tins in stock

As for the pics, I think the wonky horizons is caused by the SR, I find I have to re-level most of mine by rotating anti-clockwise too.

I wonder if the occupants of the house in the second shot bother with a window cleaner
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puma
Posted 25/09/2010 - 23:24 Link
Number 2 doesn’t need there windows washing now do they great shot
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