Feeling uninspired
Posted 16/07/2011 - 03:44
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I love balconys. Could only be improved by having someone leaning over one of them!!!
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Posted 16/07/2011 - 07:42
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Thanks Smeggy, I think you are correct there, a person would have added something to that shot.
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Posted 16/07/2011 - 08:43
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Yes - balconys is excellent. Inspired, in fact . Nice spot and, like Smeggy suggests, you can probably do even more with this location given different light and/or luck with residents
Posted 16/07/2011 - 11:53
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I think the first one could be made interesting with a careful mono conversion, and maybe a square crop to echo the cubic shapes of the balconies?
The rest are a bit drab and feel a bit awkward, although the awkwardness of shot 4 might actually work to your benefit if you tweak the levels a bit.
The rest are a bit drab and feel a bit awkward, although the awkwardness of shot 4 might actually work to your benefit if you tweak the levels a bit.
Posted 16/07/2011 - 12:52
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I really like Balconys; as Smeggy said, it's a shame there's no-one looking over one of them, but that's down to chance. I like the composition. The middle three don't do much for me at all, the composition of them seems a bit random; Train Station especially. Bridgewater Place, with that dark wall on the right and the building leaning, looks a bit awkward. These three also look to me like they have been over-processed, to the point that they have lost sharpness.
The last one is interesting, with the contrast between the rust and the building, and the people giving it a sense of scale.
The last one is interesting, with the contrast between the rust and the building, and the people giving it a sense of scale.
Posted 16/07/2011 - 15:28
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Agreed about the first - i like the reflection you managed to catch in the glass on the bottom L hand balcony.
I also like the second one BUT I would like to see if it can be shot again with some slight changes . I love the curves on the roof section - they must actually form a segment of a circle - fascinating
The thing/s I don't like, and I don't really think that cropping this one will help, are those darn intrusive cables and I don't see how you could clone them out - they're too heavy and too noticeable . I'd like to see it cropped at the bottom edge just below those sort of windows and a bit off the sky as well . There's some nice detail in the buildings behind the station
wonder what Nanhi would say about these comments - totally un technical - perhaps he would show us some examples of his work and give us the benefit of his comments on this series of Photos
I also like the second one BUT I would like to see if it can be shot again with some slight changes . I love the curves on the roof section - they must actually form a segment of a circle - fascinating
The thing/s I don't like, and I don't really think that cropping this one will help, are those darn intrusive cables and I don't see how you could clone them out - they're too heavy and too noticeable . I'd like to see it cropped at the bottom edge just below those sort of windows and a bit off the sky as well . There's some nice detail in the buildings behind the station
wonder what Nanhi would say about these comments - totally un technical - perhaps he would show us some examples of his work and give us the benefit of his comments on this series of Photos
let the education continue
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Posted 16/07/2011 - 15:52
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Love 1 but the PF is quite strong and a bit distracting (as no-one else has mentioned it perhaps I am missing something but what the hell!).
I actually like the shapes in 2 (I seem to be a bit against the grain here too!..)
I think its good you "felt" uninspired but took some keepers.
I actually like the shapes in 2 (I seem to be a bit against the grain here too!..)
I think its good you "felt" uninspired but took some keepers.
Posted 16/07/2011 - 16:30
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japers45 wrote:
Love 1 but the PF is quite strong and a bit distracting (as no-one else has mentioned it perhaps I am missing something but what the hell!).
No I noticed it too but couldn't work out if it was PF or just the harshness of the light in the reflections... but that was partly why I suggested a mono conversion.
Love 1 but the PF is quite strong and a bit distracting (as no-one else has mentioned it perhaps I am missing something but what the hell!).
Posted 16/07/2011 - 18:37
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Thanks everybody for taking the time to give me some feedback - it's all much appreciated and very welcome.
What I have noticed, and this is odd, is that I didn't think the balcony shot was too much of a big deal - a bit cliched. But I am really pleased with the 2 shots of Bridgewater Place. This is the opposite of general opinion so I don't understand what's happening there :
It was an overcast day so I have admittedly heavily processed them to add some interest, I believe this has added to the purple fringing (PF?) on shot 1.
I'll have a good read through the suggestions and comments and see what I can take from them. Thanks again.
What I have noticed, and this is odd, is that I didn't think the balcony shot was too much of a big deal - a bit cliched. But I am really pleased with the 2 shots of Bridgewater Place. This is the opposite of general opinion so I don't understand what's happening there :
It was an overcast day so I have admittedly heavily processed them to add some interest, I believe this has added to the purple fringing (PF?) on shot 1.
I'll have a good read through the suggestions and comments and see what I can take from them. Thanks again.
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