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Darkman
Posted 28/09/2010 - 19:20 Link
Hi there

Looking for some comments on a couple of pics

THanks

[IMG]http://i1098.photobucket.com/albums/g377/vanandjuanunited/IMGP1743.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i1098.photobucket.com/albums/g377/vanandjuanunited/IMGP1754.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i1098.photobucket.com/albums/g377/vanandjuanunited/IMGP0894.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://i1098.photobucket.com/albums/g377/vanandjuanunited/IMGP8375.jpg[/IMG]

Hope I have posted these correctly
Blythman
Posted 28/09/2010 - 19:54 Link
I like all of them, very much. I think the first two could be easily cropped to get rid of the fence wire. And the third could be cropped to get rid of the twig on the left. Maybe also bring out the blue in the sky, if at all possible (I think I can see a hint of blue in the background).

Edit: Faster typer than me Gareth
Alan


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Edited by Blythman: 28/09/2010 - 19:55
Stuey
Posted 28/09/2010 - 20:31 Link
Hello

I like all of them.

I agree with the comments above and would guess that picture one looks a little soft due to the movement of the head as a result of eating

It's hard to tell without enlarging the pic but my guess is that you had focus and the depth of field just about right but the shutter speed may have been too low to freeze the movement of the head - I may well have guessed wrong though

Regards



Stu
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fritzthedog
Posted 28/09/2010 - 20:35 Link
Agree with Gareth in the 1st otter and the bird. I think the 2nd otter can be improved - either by the crop as suggested or cloning that wire out would not be difficult.

The last shot - as Gareth has already said - is by far the best of the 4 - very nice shot and i suspect this shows the difference in lens quality between the Tamy tel-zoom and the Ricoh prime?

carl
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puma
Posted 28/09/2010 - 20:46 Link
there great
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08tiger
Posted 29/09/2010 - 01:45 Link
Looking a bit soft here, the light background behind the bird does not set it off so well, to much space around the bird also.Butterfly is better.
PS what is the bird type please.
C&C welcome.
Don.
Darkman
Posted 29/09/2010 - 09:01 Link
thanks for the comments
No idea what type of bird it was. Was at chester zoo.

Should also point out that these have no processing as i have never really gotten to grips with it.
Any tips for processing images as a general rule?
Edited by Darkman: 29/09/2010 - 09:16
Gwyn
Posted 29/09/2010 - 09:24 Link
The bird is a Lilac Breasted Roller.

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