Down in Dagenham Dock

paulyrichard
Posted 20/09/2009 - 19:34 Link
This photo was taken down in Dagenham Dock. I was in Dagenham visitin' a photographer friend of mine.

Cargo Containers, Dagenham Dock

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K10D
Posted 21/09/2009 - 03:56 Link
VERY well seen and composed.

Regards

Too far from a shore.
Dr. Mhuni
Posted 21/09/2009 - 05:39 Link
Great photo, Paul.

I'd also be curious to see what the same shot taken with a small aperture would look like, with the fence sharp . Perhaps it wouldn't work, with the interlocking pattern wrecking that of the containers. But I'd be curious to see it. Did you try this?
Mhuni

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davidtrout
Posted 21/09/2009 - 13:15 Link
What's it look like in colour Paul with all those containers?
david
Utopia Poppy
Posted 21/09/2009 - 17:05 Link
A good shot, I love that pattern created by the containers and the fence. However, I do find a couple of things distracting: The block of white sky top right, and something that's on the ground bottom left.

If it wasn't for these distractions and the photograph just showed the pattern of the containers and fence, I would like it very much.

Fiona
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paulyrichard
Posted 21/09/2009 - 18:58 Link
Thanks, K10D.

Mhuni, my intention was to keep the fencin' out of focus, I didn't want it vyin' too much with the containers. As a result, I don't have an image with the fencin' in focus.

Dave, the container colours were blue, grey and yellow. I'll post a colour shot too, so you can see.

Thanks, Gareth.

Fiona, thanks. I don't find the things you mention distractin', even though this image has abstract elements, it is still a scene of an industrial landscape.

Regards.
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paulyrichard
Posted 21/09/2009 - 21:48 Link
OK, here is the colour version: link
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Hardgravity
Posted 21/09/2009 - 21:54 Link
I like the colour version, but it works so much better in B&W.

A picture worthy of the treatment you gave it.
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Utopia Poppy
Posted 22/09/2009 - 13:16 Link
paulyrichard wrote:

Fiona, thanks. I don't find the things you mention distractin', even though this image has abstract elements, it is still a scene of an industrial landscape.

Regards.
Sorry, I didn't realise that this was a thread where we all say what a nice photo it is I'm still keeping my opinion.

It's a nice photo.

Fiona
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paulyrichard
Posted 22/09/2009 - 22:10 Link
Utopia Poppy wrote:
paulyrichard wrote:

Fiona, thanks. I don't find the things you mention distractin', even though this image has abstract elements, it is still a scene of an industrial landscape.

Regards.
Sorry, I didn't realise that this was a thread where we all say what a nice photo it is I'm still keeping my opinion.

Fiona
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ManixZero
Posted 22/09/2009 - 22:50 Link
I really like the photograph.

I live around the corner and it perfectly captures the mood of the area.

I haven't looked at the colour version as the mono version is right (imo)

I also like the abstracts - the way the white sky impacts on the fence, that the fence separates the viewer from the bleak scene and maybe, there's someone under the tarp on the floor?

great photograph!

Plus it reminds me why I used to get through so many rolls of FP4 in my pre-digital days!

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Lance B
Posted 23/09/2009 - 03:30 Link
Excellent capture, Paul. Both in B&W and colour work well for me.
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paulyrichard
Posted 23/09/2009 - 19:55 Link
Thumb's up for that, Gareth. Cheers, Lance.

Cheers, MZ. I have family that live in the Dagenham East area. I know Barking, Upney, Becontree and Dagenham Heathway well. In fact, I walked all the way down to Dagenham Dock via the Heathway, and back again.

There are some colourful flats/ apartment buildings in Barking now. I think they've put in a Hotel near the station, to cope with the Olympic fallout haven't they? It does look odd with Barking havin' a hotel now though.

Gettin' back to the photo, Dagenham Dock is like a ghost town over the weekend. Barking Power Station is nearby also, which I have a photo of too, taken awhile back.
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Thordell
Posted 23/09/2009 - 20:07 Link
Like both the colour and the B&W - the B&W seems to emphasize the lines and patterns, the colours are surprisingly harmonious and restful which for me kills the pleasing graphic elements of the B&W – my preference being the B&W as the composition and designs out ways the colour.
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George Lazarette
Posted 23/09/2009 - 20:17 Link
I think that the patterns are better served by B&W than by colour, though I suspect the colour one would look rather better without the fence.

So for me, like Jackie, B&W outweighs colour.

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