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Posted 22/12/2009 - 18:29
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Personally I'd say the satellite dish needs to go and that the colours are too vibrant. I think there's too much going on for this to work really well. Too many black posts, the white fence, the yellow and white lines. But that's probably just me!
I'd be interested to know how others would deal with where the house on the left leaves the frame. It always seems so awkward to manage how a scene like this exits the frame.
Mike
I'd be interested to know how others would deal with where the house on the left leaves the frame. It always seems so awkward to manage how a scene like this exits the frame.
Mike
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Posted 22/12/2009 - 20:10
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hi
thanks for the comments i know the dishes and the drain pipe
need to go as for the colours being too vibrant it straight
out of the camera might try photoshop
neil
thanks for the comments i know the dishes and the drain pipe
need to go as for the colours being too vibrant it straight
out of the camera might try photoshop
neil
cheers Neil
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Posted 22/12/2009 - 20:58
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Funky colours! The council around here would go crazy if you painted your terraced cottage that colour
I think you don't need the whole white house, just half is enough to maintain the row of colours. At the moment the white house alone is occupying too much of the frame for me.
However I kind of think Mike is right, this will be hard to get a compelling photo out of. The main problems for me are the lamppost and the sat dish on the roof. The dish would be easy to clone out, the lamppost looks like a hell of a job.
I think you don't need the whole white house, just half is enough to maintain the row of colours. At the moment the white house alone is occupying too much of the frame for me.
However I kind of think Mike is right, this will be hard to get a compelling photo out of. The main problems for me are the lamppost and the sat dish on the roof. The dish would be easy to clone out, the lamppost looks like a hell of a job.
Tim
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Posted 22/12/2009 - 21:28
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I like the idea, but would try a different crop. I'd crop halhway between the front door and window on the white house, up to the edge of the yellow housse, leaving just a small bit of work to remove a satellite dish. The lamp post and worse dish would then disappear.
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Posted 24/12/2009 - 07:32
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gtis, what do you think about this:
Posted 24/12/2009 - 13:53
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hi
thanks karmazyniello
tried to crop it in photoshop but for some strange
reason when i try to drag the cropping tool starting at
the left side it will only drag about 3/4 down the photo
neil
thanks karmazyniello
tried to crop it in photoshop but for some strange
reason when i try to drag the cropping tool starting at
the left side it will only drag about 3/4 down the photo
neil
cheers Neil
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