Brum Walkabout
Posted 23/08/2009 - 00:40
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I like the three urban photos at the top, Pentax'.
The first one would look better presented as a B&W in my view.
The first one would look better presented as a B&W in my view.
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Posted 23/08/2009 - 07:37
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Only the first one for me I'm afraid. The others don't seem to have benefited from your careful composition quite so much.
You remind me that I promised myself a walk round the city centre.
Mike
You remind me that I promised myself a walk round the city centre.
Mike
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Posted 23/08/2009 - 21:06
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#1 and #4 are for me...
Posted 28/08/2009 - 14:31
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Nos 1 and 4 for me.
I think No 4 had huge potential. The positioning of the policemans face and the eyes of the veiled lady could realy work. However, as it is, the yellow sticker top right and the white window dummy on the left distract the attention.
I too wouldn't mind meeting up in Birmingham.
I think No 4 had huge potential. The positioning of the policemans face and the eyes of the veiled lady could realy work. However, as it is, the yellow sticker top right and the white window dummy on the left distract the attention.
I too wouldn't mind meeting up in Birmingham.
Friendly Regards
Graham
Graham
Posted 28/08/2009 - 21:26
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I'm soon going to gird my loins, get up early, and grab dawn shots of Birmingham. Hopefully a fairly deserted city and interesting light - if only I can get up early!!
I too like pictures 1 and 4, especially the B/W versuon of picture 1.
Cheers
John
I too like pictures 1 and 4, especially the B/W versuon of picture 1.
Cheers
John
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Posted 11/12/2009 - 12:17
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As the others have said picture No. 1 is the most impressive. For me the black and white conversion is far better than the colour original. I think Graham is on to something with the policeman picture, there is potential there for a great image.
I also like your more abstract themes, which you posted later.
david
I also like your more abstract themes, which you posted later.
david
Posted 11/12/2009 - 14:51
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Numbers 1 and 4 for me. The BW version of Number 1 is an improvement.
There is also something about number 3 which is pleasing. Quite hard to put a finger on it
There is also something about number 3 which is pleasing. Quite hard to put a finger on it
Tim
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Posted 11/12/2009 - 15:42
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1 (b&w) and 4 for me too. I agree with Graham that the yellow sticker is distracting and should go, but I like the window dummy. I would crop just a little from the top of the image though. What is the policeman holding?
Cheers
Chris
Cheers
Chris
Posted 12/12/2009 - 09:46
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The policeman is holding a juggling ball by the look of it.
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