Brathay Morning
Posted 20/04/2014 - 12:21
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I like number one best and would probably mess around with a black and white to bring out the "smoke on the water"
Composition looks fine to me but they are all a bit green for my tastes. I've never liked green grass (no TJ jokes) so usually bring them down a notch. They just seem a bit dominant in the frame
Composition looks fine to me but they are all a bit green for my tastes. I've never liked green grass (no TJ jokes) so usually bring them down a notch. They just seem a bit dominant in the frame
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Posted 20/04/2014 - 12:26
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Thanks QC... useful advice.
I'll have a play with B&W for the first one - that's a good idea . The green hasn't been boosted on these - it's just the way it came out - but I'll see what they're like if I bring it down a notch.
I'll have a play with B&W for the first one - that's a good idea . The green hasn't been boosted on these - it's just the way it came out - but I'll see what they're like if I bring it down a notch.
Posted 20/04/2014 - 13:43
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The first one is especially lovely. K.
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Posted 20/04/2014 - 16:49
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Agreed on No 1, it has just about everything. Great atmosphere & subdued lighting make it. Did you get any from that position just a little wider?
I like all the others, not so much the tree close-up - nice compositions (the lone duck one is great!). I'm seeing rather bright greens though, look a bit too glowing for the conditions - I'm sure its a minor tweak.
Looking forward to some more
I like all the others, not so much the tree close-up - nice compositions (the lone duck one is great!). I'm seeing rather bright greens though, look a bit too glowing for the conditions - I'm sure its a minor tweak.
Looking forward to some more
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Posted 20/04/2014 - 19:02
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Thanks for the comments everyone... much appreciated
For interest, here's a quick B&W version of #1

Not sure I prefer this to the colour version. Found it difficult to emphasise the mist in a B&W conversion
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Agreed on No 1, it has just about everything. Great atmosphere & subdued lighting make it. Did you get any from that position just a little wider?
I would have liked to go wider, but immediately to the left of the frame there was a yellow dump truck, parked up next to some path re-building works. Rather spoilt the ambience Agreed on No 1, it has just about everything. Great atmosphere & subdued lighting make it. Did you get any from that position just a little wider?
For interest, here's a quick B&W version of #1

Not sure I prefer this to the colour version. Found it difficult to emphasise the mist in a B&W conversion
Posted 20/04/2014 - 19:08
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Lovely images Tim, I particularly like the first and last, with the colour version of the first one preferred to the BW.
They don't look soft to me, just beautiful.
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David
They don't look soft to me, just beautiful.
Regards
David
Posted 20/04/2014 - 23:34
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yep the black and white works great for me
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Here are some taken handheld with the 18-135, walking down the River Brathay after photographing dawn over Elterwater.
As always C&C most welcome, although I do know some of these are (nicely) soft
#1 Mist on the River
#2 Morning Light
#3 A duck
#4 A Nuthatch (if you look carefully :wink
#5 Fence
Some of my vaguely better stuff