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Posted 30/08/2010 - 11:09
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I'd probably 'level' the shot first. Rather than the clump of dead weeds in the foreground, you could use the yellow flowers as a focal point. The taller eucalypts to the left would look better if you include the whole of the crowns.
Hope that helps.
I'd probably 'level' the shot first. Rather than the clump of dead weeds in the foreground, you could use the yellow flowers as a focal point. The taller eucalypts to the left would look better if you include the whole of the crowns.
Hope that helps.
Posted 30/08/2010 - 17:46
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I-berg have taken that on board,but the photo is full size so no chance of changing the perspective, I like the three trees in the centre, if I get up that way in the near future I will have a look at it.
thanks for that I-Burg
thanks for that I-Burg
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Posted 31/08/2010 - 13:59
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What iBerg said
Sorry Monty, but I'm afraid this one needs to be re-shot (in my opinion, obviously ). Apart from the tilting, bland sky and ugly wire, there doesn't seem to be a focal point. If it's those 3 tall trees in the centre-left then the yellow bush and the foreground dead weeds are competing (in a bad way) for attention.
Sorry Monty, but I'm afraid this one needs to be re-shot (in my opinion, obviously ). Apart from the tilting, bland sky and ugly wire, there doesn't seem to be a focal point. If it's those 3 tall trees in the centre-left then the yellow bush and the foreground dead weeds are competing (in a bad way) for attention.
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Posted 31/08/2010 - 17:15
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Here is a crop but it isn`t what I saw, and wanted to capture,but you are right it looks better.
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Posted 17/09/2010 - 10:45
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This does not work for me I am afraid. The light is uninteresting, there appears to be no defined subject and the compositions is not great. Sorry if that sounds a bit harsh. Look for interesting light, subjects and composition.
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