Another Dutch sunset

322 posts
16 years
Netherlands

Posted 25/09/2009 - 21:45 Link

I'm not really happy with this one and I'd appreciate your thoughts. Let me know what you think please and thanks for looking.

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Dodging and burning are steps to take care of mistakes God made in establishing tonal relationships. - Ansel Adams -

Edited by lidy: 25/09/2009 - 21:45

Thordell Thordell

667 posts
18 years
Near Spalding,
Lincs.

Posted 25/09/2009 - 21:54 Link

Why do you not like it? Think it would have been better with the figures out of the centre, do wonder if chopping about 1/3 off the left to the tripod would solve the problem, beautiful shot of the sunset. Have a go at a few different crops and see if you can find one you like better.

Jackie H
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Edited by Thordell: 25/09/2009 - 22:04