A few red squiggles

Blythman
Posted 04/08/2014 - 10:11 Link
A few red squirrels, that I thought I'd share. Any C&C gratefully received. All with the K5 and DA 300

I know some will suggest losing the blade of grass on the first, but I'd sooner leave it, in line with Natural History photography expectations.

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Red Squirrel by Alan Wennington, on Flickr

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Nutcracker, Red Squirrel by Alan Wennington, on Flickr

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Red Squirrel by Alan Wennington, on Flickr

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Red Squirrel in the heather by Alan Wennington, on Flickr
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jvs
Posted 04/08/2014 - 10:20 Link
Lovely shots of a hard-to-find species these days, Alan. So hard to get real sharpness of fuzzy fur like you have done. No. 3 is the one for me - a suggestion of tense alertness that you don't get from the more common nut-nibbling stance. Brilliant!
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John
swarf
Posted 04/08/2014 - 10:39 Link
Super set - #3 for me as well.

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Algernon
Posted 04/08/2014 - 12:50 Link
Fantastic especially the 4th.

No problem with the blade of grass on the 1st.

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Posted 04/08/2014 - 13:00 Link
A great set Alan. Well up to your usual high standard.

Best regards
Too far from a shore.
McGregNi
Posted 04/08/2014 - 16:28 - Helpful Comment Link
All really good, great angles and sharp The last is my favourite as it sets the subject in an interesting context and the background colours complement it perfectly (unlike the first which fights a bit for attention).

Whilst impressive technically I don't actually think the extreme frame filling telephoto shots suit this creature as much, say, as birds do - its better to see some space around them and some of the environment.

The first is the only with a natural looking catchlight - personally I'd clone in a very small catchlight into the middle of the eyes in the other 3. One final thing, on the first 3 (the last is perfect!) I'd suggest a small reduction in yellow saturation. Thanks for sharing thee lovely squirrel images!
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Blythman
Posted 04/08/2014 - 19:16 Link
Thanks for feedback, folks.

Very interesting feedback Nigel. Be interested in the thoughts of others on your points
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McGregNi
Posted 04/08/2014 - 19:25 Link
Oh yeah, sure, that might be hard to predict . But you never know, its bound to be interesting ... thats what its all about of course. Just have to hope not too many of my supporters have de-camped ....
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davidtrout
Posted 04/08/2014 - 19:49 Link
I like to see a subject such as this filling the frame. And so sharp too. You don't say what lens you were using Alan, its either a long 'un or you got in damn close.
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RussV
Posted 04/08/2014 - 20:52 Link
I like the close ups, its nice to see the detail. 1 and 2 are my favourites.
NeilP
Posted 04/08/2014 - 20:54 Link
Great set, the last shot is the best for me
davidstorm
Posted 04/08/2014 - 21:59 Link
All of these shots are beautiful and expertly taken.

I sort of agree with Nigel in a way, in that number 4 is my favourite and also that in number 1 the background fights a bit for attention. However, as mentioned on the 'other forum', this for me is not because of the compositions, but because the greens look a bit aggressive and over-saturated, especially in the first one. Also the reds look a little bright to me in 1, 2 and 3, whereas in number 4 all of the colouring looks natural and neutral.

I realise this is a bit brave making comments like this on such superb images, but I have to say what I see!

Best wishes
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McGregNi
Posted 04/08/2014 - 22:08 Link
davidstorm wrote:
... I sort of agree with Nigel in a way ...
Steady on David

davidstorm wrote:
... I realise this is a bit brave making comments like this on such superb images, but I have to say what I see!


Be brave! I think in fact when the quality is already high it is only the finers point that matter - but they can have such an impact as polishing touches that it is very worthwhile.

You mentioned things that were said somewhere else .... getting complicated now commenting on images isn't it ....
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davidstorm
Posted 04/08/2014 - 22:20 - Helpful Comment Link
McGregNi wrote:
You mentioned things that were said somewhere else .... getting complicated now commenting on images isn't it ....
Ahh, somewhere else.......now where could that be?

Regarding the images, I failed to spot Nigel's point about the yellow saturation, but on reading Nigel's post again I think he may be spot on. I took the liberty of copying a couple of the images and turning down the yellows in PS3, this seemed to me to make the images more natural in colouring.

I'm not going to take the liberty of re-posting them here as I do not wish to hijack Alan's thread.

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Blythman
Posted 04/08/2014 - 23:39 Link
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Much appreciated.

Thanks for the detailed comments Nigel. Taking onboard the comments from you and David, below is #3 with the yellow saturation turned down somewhat. Be grateful for thoughts.

As to Nigel's additional points, coniferous forest floors aren't the most photogenic. I think tight crops are therefore the order of the day. In fact in #2 the bit I don't like is the twig bottom right. I wouldn't want to be sitting the squirrel amongst a load of these twigs.

Also as it happens #2 is a behavioural shot, and I wouldn't like the hazelnut kernel to get lost amongst the forest floor. I'd watched, heard and photographed the squirrel making the hole to extract the nut, and I see the kernel as an integral part of the shot.But do acknowledge there is a place for an evironmental shot hence #4

As to the catchlights, I'd be grateful for more of an expalnation. I haven't done anything specific to the eyes. I have no plans to lose these actual catchlights and clone in new artificial, "more natural looking" catchlights.

Firstly, #3 re-posted
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And then a close up of the eye, with catchlight
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Edited by Blythman: 04/08/2014 - 23:41

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