5 exposure tree

davex
Posted 14/05/2011 - 15:04 Link
C&C welcome,
Put the tree in the middle as it is sort of the point of the image.
Not sure about the bright spot where the sun was rising.
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paulyrichard
Posted 14/05/2011 - 15:32 Link
The unique and stunted husk of what used to be is well placed, but that blown sun is killing the image.
Something like this I always like to see in B&W. Is there any way of cloning out or remedying that sun?
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Edited by paulyrichard: 14/05/2011 - 15:32
aliengrove
Posted 14/05/2011 - 16:16 Link
I agree with Pauly, though I like the colour. I am assuming (perhaps incorrectly) that as this is 5 exposures, the most under exposed frame doesn't have those blown highlights? If so, you could try blending the sun from that shot into this image.
Smeggypants
Posted 14/05/2011 - 16:47 Link
I kinda like the blown sun. B&W Works well with blown suns. Try B&W
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davex
Posted 14/05/2011 - 17:12 Link
Cheers guys,
Have tried B&W, but for some reason I just don't seem to get it, think this one is probably a lost cause, cannot get rid of the blow out even with adding in the original darkest frame.
Never mind, as the saying goes, there are plenty more trees in the woods;

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Smeggypants
Posted 14/05/2011 - 17:22 Link
Why get rid of it? I like it.

All subjective of course.
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Smeggypants
Posted 14/05/2011 - 17:35 Link
here ya go ... I had a go

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davex
Posted 14/05/2011 - 17:39 Link
Much better Smeggy, for some reason I only seem to be able to "see" in colour.

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MarkTaylor
Posted 14/05/2011 - 18:04 Link
Smeggypants wrote:
Why get rid of it? I like it.

All subjective of course.
I agree, in fact I'd go as far as to say I really don't understand the aversion to blown highlights which seems to be so prevalent these days. I think they can be quite effective for certain images in the right context. Particularly when shooting into the sun, a circumstance in which the naked eye really doesn't perform any better than (for example) the first image above, anyway.

I think they're fine in both of the images above, although in image 2 they cover a slightly larger area than might perhaps be ideal, it in no way makes it a 'bad' image.
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Edited by MarkTaylor: 14/05/2011 - 18:08
paulyrichard
Posted 14/05/2011 - 18:04 Link
It is very possible to use the cloning tool to touch up and unify the edges of that corona. It's all about changing the opacity levels. I did it here just using Photoplus X3 software, not the best piece of software but it's OK for cloning and such.

I noticed a lot of halo effects in this and nearly puked over myself, that clarity tool, I don't know!


[IMG]http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j159/paulyrichard/tree1.jpg[/IMG]




Here is a soft-focus B&W treatment:


[IMG]http://i79.photobucket.com/albums/j159/paulyrichard/tree21of1.jpg[/IMG]
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Smeggypants
Posted 14/05/2011 - 18:31 Link
MarkTaylor wrote:
Smeggypants wrote:
Why get rid of it? I like it.

All subjective of course.
I agree, in fact I'd go as far as to say I really don't understand the aversion to blown highlights which seems to be so prevalent these days. I think they can be quite effective for certain images in the right context. Particularly when shooting into the sun, a circumstance in which the naked eye really doesn't perform any better than (for example) the first image above, anyway.

I think they're fine in both of the images above, although in image 2 they cover a slightly larger area than might perhaps be ideal, it in no way makes it a 'bad' image.
Here's a blown Highlight snap from my recent truckfest shoot. I thought it worked really well ...

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MarkTaylor
Posted 14/05/2011 - 18:51 Link
Smeggypants wrote:
Here's a blown Highlight snap from my recent truckfest shoot. I thought it worked really well ...
Yes I like that one too.
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