1st day out at Hawk clearing


Kal 10 d

Link Posted 23/02/2008 - 07:39
http://s271.photobucket.com/albums/jj136/leeksfraser/?start=all


Be as critical as you want-i can take it.....
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justgetoutandride

Link Posted 23/02/2008 - 09:45
Which one do you want C&C on, all of them?

perhaps it would be better to put up a few images here that you particularly want C&C on, we need to see them before commenting. after all if you want us to put some effort into looking at you images, perhaps you should put some effort into showing them to us in the first place.
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Kal 10 d

Link Posted 23/02/2008 - 09:57






Sorry Aj-i figured in general you may wanna see my 1st days takings....new here/and with camera -still figuring out how to use it all....(photobucket inc).
K10 d-18-55mm
Tamron 70-300mm

The purpose of life is to live a life of purpose..

Hyram

Link Posted 23/02/2008 - 11:03
Assuming that these two photographs are, exactly as taken, with the first one I would crop it right down leaving just the hawk on the post. The background does nothing for the photograph.

With the second one, it is a shame that the extremities of the hawk are missing, I would therefore try a crop on this one as well, possibly also taking out the post whcih is not in focus.
Hyram

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justgetoutandride

Link Posted 23/02/2008 - 23:12
As hyram says, they could do with a good crop, it the image will take it. i.e. if it has not been cropped already.

As for wanting to show us your images, thank you, I'm sure most people here appreciate it, but you also seemed to be asking for criticism. Looking through a large selection of images to critique is hard work, so more than 3-4 is going to put people off. If you critique your work yourself, then post up the 3 best of the day and you will help everyone.
Please call me aj,

I use a Pentax K10D, on a MacBook with LightRoom (vers 1.3 + beta 2)

http://www.ba-joseph.co.uk/gallery

MX veteran

Link Posted 24/02/2008 - 02:58
No. 2 should have the post in 'cos that is the point of what the hawk is doing. It doesn't matter to me if it is not in focus.
K100D Super, 18-55, 50-200, Sigma 10-20, Sigma 70mm macro and lots of old lenses

Kal 10 d

Link Posted 24/02/2008 - 08:41
MX veteran wrote:
No. 2 should have the post in 'cos that is the point of what the hawk is doing. It doesn't matter to me if it is not in focus.

Thanx MX -i agree and it was "on the move" at the time too.... . At the moment i tend not to ps my images - so wysiwyg-given time i will learn that process. Thanks for comments guys ...
K10 d-18-55mm
Tamron 70-300mm

The purpose of life is to live a life of purpose..
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