Great work, interestingly, the image looks very detailed on 27inch Apple Thunderbolt Display :)

Great work Trish, roll on warm sunny days :)

Then delete the previous... Very vivid.

I love this crop, well done kidda :)

Powerful, the eye in particular is mesmering, I'm not sure about cropping through the nose :)

You deserve a ton of comments on this wonderful portrait. You certainly shine in this group :)

Nice work Trish, she looks very relaxed in your company :)

Taking up the ISO might be a good start, the sort of dull grey light we are experiencing at the moment in no way helps these type of shots where you are are shooting into the shadow created by your subject! As mentioned in an earlier comment, try selective dodging in Photoshop, process subtlety. Bringing up brightness will increase colour noise, if this does happen, run the image through the ...

The exposure is fine however I would prefer less room above head and more room below chin, a basic portrait principle :) Have you any more from the set?

What's to like? EVERYTHING :)