A portrait in never simply a portrait. You have to find the soul, which you got positively. Perfect focusing on the right eye and a good choice that warmth of the background. :)

nice image indeed, very lively

bravo! :)

very good shot, nice bw and post processing. I would perhaps either cut more, or leave in the frame the feets of the child on the left. Imagine anyway to keep inside the shot only the three heads and the shoulders of the child on the right.

lovely!