young couple 2

Well Ime still very much a noob and not very good with portraits but heres my 2 cents...


1) I dont like the 2 black corneres in the upper corners, ide erase them.
2) I like what you have done with the guy. I think the B+W works well for him.
3)I dont know what you have done to the girl but theres a few flaws, she has a "orange" cheek (from flash or color adjustments??)
And also she has "patches" missing (right shoulder, forehead, hair etc)
Ime guessing this is from you trying to reduce noise or something?

If you re-do the girl (pardon the expression) I think you will have a nice shot with good composure maby bring the guy down a tad to?

Keep at it!

Looks very manipulated to the point it could have just been cut out in photoshop and then plonked onto a white background. Just doesnt look at all natural.