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Butterfly princess

by robheath

My niece after she had her face painted for the first time.
Feedback appreciated!

Uploaded19/09/2009 - 18:37

CategoryPortraits / People

BodyPENTAX K10D

Shutter Speed1/125

Aperturef/4

LensN/A

ISO100

Focal Length90mm

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Date Taken	29/08/2008 - 16:08
Make	PENTAX Corporation
Model	PENTAX K10D
Program Mode	Program
Metering Mode	Spot
Shutter Speed	1/125
Aperture	f/4
ISO	100
Focal Length	90mm
Lens	N/A

thoramay thoramay

618 posts
15 years

Posted 19/09/2009 - 21:42 Link

Right or wrong..its personal but I would take out the white lines on the left, either through photoshop or cropping. I would also crop the bottom just below the chin. It would have helped had the two images been seperated just a bit. The idea and the capture of the face and expression I love and has been well done. Hope this gives another perspective for you.

conexus conexus

29 posts
16 years

Posted 20/09/2009 - 00:14 Link

Hey Rob I like it and I agree with the above, I often use the comments to play with other peoples photos and learn form the experience I did this on yours and I think it works if you want the image send me your email and I will forward it to you

Mike Court
K3, K7, 12 Pentax-17 pentax18-250, pentax50-135 2.8, tamron 16 - 70 2.8 18-55, pentaxc 50-200,pentax 50mm1.7,metz flash bowens 500 and studio stuff