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Photo Information
My first attempt at portrait photography at the local club
13/11/2009 - 08:49selectcase
CategoryPortraits / People
Shutter Speed1/125
Aperturef/11
LensN/A
ISO200
Focal Length34mm
Views/Likes139/0

sam-joseph

Link Posted 13/11/2009 - 11:40
Well done. nicely lit, good black background and a bloody good sort too.
Sam-Joseph
Pentax K7, Sigma 17-70 f2.8-4.5, Sigma 70-200 f2.8 APO EX, Sigma 70-300 APO, Sigma 1.4x TC, Vivitar 2x TC. Takumar 135mm f2.5, SMC Pentax A 50mm 1:1.7, SMC Pentax -M 1:4 200mm, Pentax X70

thoughton

Link Posted 13/11/2009 - 15:28
Nice photo of a lovely model. It looks a bit dark to me, although that is probably just personal taste. Also the lighting has made her front teeth a bit too prominent. Maybe brighten the teeth to the right?
Tim
AF - Pentax K5, Sigma 10-20/4-5.6, Tamron 17-50/2.8, Sigma 30/1.4, Sigma 70-200/2.8, Tamron 70-300/4-5.6
MF - Vivitar CF 28/2.8, Tamron AD2 90/2.5, MTO 1000/11
Stuff - Metz 58 AF1, Cactus v4, Nikon SB24, Raynox 150, Sigma 1.4x TC, Sigma 2x TC, Kenko 2x macro TC, Redsnapper 283 tripod, iMac 27, Macbook Pro 17, iPad, iPhone 3G
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selectcase

Link Posted 13/11/2009 - 16:24
Thanks for the advice - i wander if my comp screen needs calibrating as it looks darker on the works computer compared to my laptop at home. I will have to get to grips with photoshop and look at those teeth as you are right there.

K7D DA 18-55 mk11WR|50-200 wr|DA16-45|Tamron SP90|lots of manual pentax glass

imagesteve

Link Posted 13/11/2009 - 18:48
Nice , nice, nice!!!
2x K10D bodies, 2x FA 28-200 3.8-5.6, DA 18-55, A 50 F2, 50mm Macro, 360 FGZ. Still saving for the 60-250 DA* Also have a Z10 35mm and a K1000 just for fun. IF PENTAX IS THE ANSWER, WHO CARES WHAT THE QUESTION IS...!
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simonarthurs

Link Posted 14/11/2009 - 09:46
Lovely.....and the photo is not bad either. It looks a tad dark but I personally don't mind this in this particular instance as this helps draw the eye to the outline of the model and as she is also in black (?) and then up to the face and eyes (shame there is no glint in the left eye), overall this works for me.

Let me know how you go on with the colour calibration as I am having the same trouble between PC monitor and laptop montitor.
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