Somewhere Between

by witdog

Uploaded08/04/2011 - 00:14
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K10D
Posted 08/04/2011 - 00:43 Link
Lot's of potential but you have just too much non detailed foreground. Had you moved in or framed closer to the sea weed, then that would have made a huge difference.Maybe a crop across the bottom would help?

The scene is wonderful, needs a little bit of detail bringing out on the rocks behind the sea weed.

Hindsight is a pain but helps. Fill flash on the rock with a little -EV on the flash would also have been an option.

Best regards.
Too far from a shore.
GIULIO57
Posted 08/04/2011 - 06:42 Link
I like it a lot
sandinista
Posted 08/04/2011 - 09:17 Link
For me this compo works, I find the textural details/lines in the sand draw the eye nicely towards the further rocks and thus the dramatic sky, very nice
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wooly
Posted 08/04/2011 - 09:53 Link
Agree with Jim, in the larger view the texture of the sand really comes out to take you in to the shot. Some nice smokey water in this also

Nice one Wooly
puma
Posted 08/04/2011 - 18:42 Link
I like it a lot
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bwlchmawr
Posted 08/04/2011 - 19:11 Link
Hmm. I'm torn. Thought it looked just fine with the bare beach in the foreground then used just the top and it looks...well, perhaps even better!
Best wishes,

Andrew

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szgabor
Posted 09/04/2011 - 10:26 Link
I agree with Jim. I like it a lot.
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