Situation Vacant?

by sandinista

Uploaded26/01/2011 - 22:51
CategoryPhoto Journalism
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nonur
Posted 27/01/2011 - 09:33 Link
Good mono work!
Regards,
Nezih
GIULIO57
Posted 27/01/2011 - 12:21 Link
nonur wrote:
Good mono work!

I agree with you
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sandinista
Posted 28/01/2011 - 23:22 Link
THanks very much Nezih, Giulio, much appreciated
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wadna
Posted 29/01/2011 - 05:45 Link
She's being bombarded with messages sandinista.
There's a halo around her indicating this has been over sharpened or over processed (the former I suspect).
You could crop out the brick wall & the left edge producing a nearly square (& stronger) image.
Regards,
Ian.
Edited by wadna: 29/01/2011 - 05:45
sandinista
Posted 29/01/2011 - 09:12 Link
Thanks Ian, I'll have a rework of the original and post a link to the result, be interested to see what you, and anyone else, think.
Great simplicity is only won by an intense moment or by years of intelligent effort. T.S Eliot

Gear Not enough!!
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sandinista
Posted 29/01/2011 - 18:06 Link
Recropped image here clicky Can't think of a title for it though, Situation Vacant isn't really suitable now the employment agency has been cropped out
Great simplicity is only won by an intense moment or by years of intelligent effort. T.S Eliot

Gear Not enough!!
PPG
Flickr
My not so new website
nonur
Posted 29/01/2011 - 18:15 Link
Recropped version is certainly stronger, Jim. And I like it more. Only a suggestion but the name could be "Age of mobiles".
Regards,
Nezih
sandinista
Posted 29/01/2011 - 18:22 Link
Good suggestion Nezih, thanks, that's given me food for thought
Great simplicity is only won by an intense moment or by years of intelligent effort. T.S Eliot

Gear Not enough!!
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My not so new website
wadna
Posted 29/01/2011 - 20:44 Link
"Recropped image here"
I would have cropped less on the left leaving the sign on the edge.
Regards,
Ian.
Edited by wadna: 29/01/2011 - 20:46
sandinista
Posted 29/01/2011 - 21:00 Link
wadna wrote:
I would have cropped less on the left leaving the sign on the edge.
Regards,
Ian.

I concur with you on this Ian, it was in my mind even as I did it. Wanted to keep the girl central. I still think there is a good image in there somewhere
Great simplicity is only won by an intense moment or by years of intelligent effort. T.S Eliot

Gear Not enough!!
PPG
Flickr
My not so new website
Edited by sandinista: 29/01/2011 - 21:00

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