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Uploaded02/03/2012 - 00:57
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davidstorm
Posted 02/03/2012 - 10:42 Link
I can understand what you are trying to achieve with this shot, but it's just a little too dark. A hint more detail in the shadows would improve it no end.

Regards
David
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GIULIO57
Posted 02/03/2012 - 12:30 Link
I like your use of shapes and lights
pauljay
Posted 03/03/2012 - 12:42 Link
Personal taste but it works for me just the way it is, except for the distraction lower middle!
Paul.

Photography is not a sport. It has no rules. Everything must be dared and tried! (Bill Brandt)
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LSJ
Posted 03/03/2012 - 19:25 Link
Thanks all for your comments.

davidstorm wrote:
I can understand what you are trying to achieve with this shot, but it's just a little too dark. A hint more detail in the shadows would improve it no end.

Regards
David
Thanks for commenting David, but actually, I did/do want it like this. I love the way the light touches the edge of these towers at sunset (they are black!) and as Giulio says, the resultant light/shape play - the photo is all about form.

pauljay wrote:
Personal taste but it works for me just the way it is, except for the distraction lower middle!
Thanks Paul. I deliberated about the traffic cone for a long time! Make it prominent? Take it away? In the end I did neither - so you are right, it becomes a distraction! So, v2 on the way - hopefully, if you read this, you could pass judgement - thanks again.

Lloyd

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