The Red Carpet
by AndrewA
This shot was wholly disappointing in its raw state; which was a real shame as I loved the subject and the figures.
So, inspired by some of the pictures at the Sheffield Photographic Society Exhibition I have had a play in PSE.
Would be interested in any thoughts, postive or negative.
So, inspired by some of the pictures at the Sheffield Photographic Society Exhibition I have had a play in PSE.
Would be interested in any thoughts, postive or negative.
Uploaded25/02/2012 - 12:42
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Posted 25/02/2012 - 14:02
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I like the noise Andrew and the figures also the red colour really comes alive, its better than most we saw yesterday. BTW new lens is great. Best wishes Trixie
Posted 25/02/2012 - 15:47
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I like idea, red,metallic rodes and figures at the end of tunnel. I don't like red tones on the roof of tunnel. However GOOD capture an nice compo.IMHO low key (colour version)could work better so to keep two figures (as silhouettes)in the dark against a white explosed background. Try to keep out the red.....As I'm what I'm I MUST SAY...."for this purpose it could work better in BW".
Posted 25/02/2012 - 18:59
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Steady99 wrote:
I like this Drew and agree with Trixie about the noise which I assume you added. Where is this?
Hi Craig, thanks for your comments. Yep the noise and texture was intended. I like this Drew and agree with Trixie about the noise which I assume you added. Where is this?
It is near the Wicker and the canal bason under the old railway bridge.
Posted 25/02/2012 - 19:00
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sarc wrote:
It is well seen and a good concept also well composed.
There appears to be a lot of noise evident for ISO 400 though? An improvement could be to achieved by removing the far end of the left hand side wall and balance the white about the end of the walkway.
Regards
Bob
Thanks Bob, I have incorporated your suggestions into a new version.
It is well seen and a good concept also well composed.
There appears to be a lot of noise evident for ISO 400 though? An improvement could be to achieved by removing the far end of the left hand side wall and balance the white about the end of the walkway.
Regards
Bob
Posted 25/02/2012 - 19:01
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GIULIO57 wrote:
I like idea, red,metallic rodes and figures at the end of tunnel. I don't like red tones on the roof of tunnel. However GOOD capture an nice compo.IMHO low key (colour version)could work better so to keep two figures (as silhouettes)in the dark against a white explosed background. Try to keep out the red.....As I'm what I'm I MUST SAY...."for this purpose it could work better in BW".
Thanks, mono version done
I like idea, red,metallic rodes and figures at the end of tunnel. I don't like red tones on the roof of tunnel. However GOOD capture an nice compo.IMHO low key (colour version)could work better so to keep two figures (as silhouettes)in the dark against a white explosed background. Try to keep out the red.....As I'm what I'm I MUST SAY...."for this purpose it could work better in BW".
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There appears to be a lot of noise evident for ISO 400 though? An improvement could be to achieved by removing the far end of the left hand side wall and balance the white about the end of the walkway.
Regards
Bob