Just Katie
by jeg1961
This is the latest shot of my daughter Katie, who will be 17 years old on Monday 16 April. I have submitted this photo as my Portrait Homework for my Photography Course.
Uploaded11/04/2012 - 21:04
CategoryPortraits / People
Posted 11/04/2012 - 21:38
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leep wrote:
Lovely portrait
+1 of a pretty, young lady I must add. The texture of the clothing and the hair adds a lot of character to the picture. I am not so sure about the shadow area around her right shoulder though. A shallow DOF would have worked extremely well IMO. Overall an excellent picture and those are some captivating eyes . My compliments to both of you.
Lovely portrait
Posted 11/04/2012 - 22:28
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Happy Birthday, Katie!
You're lovely.
You're lovely.
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Posted 11/04/2012 - 22:41
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Nice shot Jeremy. I hope you don't mind a couple of suggestions? If Katie was a little further from the background it would be more diffused / less distracting. Also, I don't know what lens was used but if you have one with a wider aperture this would also focus attention on Katie and blur out any other details in the background.
Keep posting your pics - they are getting better all the time!
Regards
David
Keep posting your pics - they are getting better all the time!
Regards
David
Posted 12/04/2012 - 17:50
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davidstorm wrote:
Nice shot Jeremy. If Katie was a little further from the background it would be more diffused / less distracting.
I agree. But this is a great portrait. Katie has piercing eyes. Happy Birthday!Nice shot Jeremy. If Katie was a little further from the background it would be more diffused / less distracting.
Regards,
Jeeess
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