Maldon sunrise 3

Visit to Maldon early am to photograph a sunrise over the estuary with beached boats in the foreground. Converted to B/W in PS3.
Now reworked after comments from previous image. Now much improved?

Uploaded31/03/2010 - 21:20

CategoryBlack & White

BodyPENTAX K10D

Shutter Speed1

Aperturef/22

LensN/A

ISO200

Focal Length23mm

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Date Taken	28/03/2010 - 05:03
Make	PENTAX Corporation
Model	PENTAX K10D
Program Mode	Aperture Priority
Metering Mode	Multi-segment
Shutter Speed	1
Aperture	f/22
ISO	200
Focal Length	23mm
Lens	N/A

wadna wadna

291 posts
18 years
Nimbin,
Australia

Posted 31/03/2010 - 22:09 Link

The crop at the top works & improves the image IMO but you're still stuck with the FG carrying little detail. Perhaps some work on the tones of the FG to bring up a bit more detail could be worth trying.

Regards, Ian.

pauljay pauljay

46 posts
17 years
The Dutch Alps!

Posted 01/04/2010 - 17:55 Link

Think the title needs correction to Maldon!
The lack of detail in the foreground leads the eye to the boat and then into the background. The format does it for me.

Paul.

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