Jetty
by davidstorm
I would be interested in comments on this image. It clearly is not natural in colour and I did think of processing it with a blue tinge, or as a straight Black & White.
Does it work?
Is it cliched?
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PS I noticed some sensor dirt on the first version of this I posted, so I've cleaned this up and re-posted it.
Does it work?
Is it cliched?
K-5, DA 16-45, Redsnapper Tripod and Hat!
PS I noticed some sensor dirt on the first version of this I posted, so I've cleaned this up and re-posted it.
Uploaded24/11/2012 - 11:57
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Posted 24/11/2012 - 12:38
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I like it, though I think the colour works better on the wood and water than on the fell and sky
Posted 24/11/2012 - 12:40
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Does it wort ? .. it does for me
Is it cliched ?, .. I frankly don't think so
IMHO that's a nearly pure artistic creation, David, .. I see nothing wrong with it, .. some would prefer yellow tinge, others likes greens .. and so on so forth; .. anyway I much like the compo of this
regards,
Is it cliched ?, .. I frankly don't think so
IMHO that's a nearly pure artistic creation, David, .. I see nothing wrong with it, .. some would prefer yellow tinge, others likes greens .. and so on so forth; .. anyway I much like the compo of this
regards,
Posted 24/11/2012 - 12:41
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It works, but I think you'll get a much better image in B&W, David.
Regards,
Nezih
Nezih
Posted 24/11/2012 - 12:57
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A rare and wonderful image which works even with the odd colour. But I agree with Nezih's comment.
Best wishes,
Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
My website: http://www.ephotozine.com/user/bwlchmawr-199050
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Posted 24/11/2012 - 13:38
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nonur wrote:
It works, but I think you'll get a much better image in B&W, David.
I think I also agree on this although I do like the posted colour for it's artistic merit?It works, but I think you'll get a much better image in B&W, David.
The posted version takes me back to your Forum thread on 'Is it Natural' and, as there, only you can say.
I am a little concerned for you safety, however ! The angle of the planks near the bottom edge makes it look as if the jetty is about to collapse !
Best wishes
Peter
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Be interesting to see different versions of this ( current, b&w, blue tinge, stronger contrast version etc) together!!!
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