Future Jail

by AxelLuther

This building in this form only exists in my mind (but I am not going to become a architect for jails )
Uploaded27/09/2011 - 07:53
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jeff0000
Posted 27/09/2011 - 08:19 Link
i do like this but just a bit dark u no i love your work
playing firm but fair all the way
Edited by jeff0000: 27/09/2011 - 08:20
AxelLuther
Posted 27/09/2011 - 08:47 Link
jeff0000 wrote:
i do like this but just a bit dark u no i love your work
Hi Jeff - I fully aggree - actually this might be one of these non-calibrated monitor issues - I uploaded it from my home PC and it looked fine. Now, looking at it from my work PC I would also say - too dark (I might have to invest the 150€ to get a Spyder3 )
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Colors are the lack of darkness

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DrOrloff
Posted 27/09/2011 - 09:09 Link
In addition the vignette is uneven - heavier on the right hand side. I don't think it needs a vignette but if so I think it would be better symmetrical.
Edited by DrOrloff: 27/09/2011 - 09:10
AxelLuther
Posted 27/09/2011 - 09:16 Link
DrOrloff wrote:
In addition the vignette is uneven - heavier on the right hand side. I don't think it needs a vignette but if so I think it would be better symmetrical.
I see your point - actually what I tried was: the right side is a mirroring of the left side and to increase the perspective effect, I compressed the right side to something like 50%. I wanted to increase the effect even more so I added a black gradient overlay to it. But you are right - it feels now more like a vignette and not really like a perspective light gradient. So this add-on was really contraproductive - I hope I still have the original so that I can produce a version without this gradient.
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Colors are the lack of darkness

You find more of my pictures here: https://pentaxphotogallery.com/artists/axelluther or on my web page: www.axel-luther.com
GIULIO57
Posted 27/09/2011 - 12:16 Link
trixie
Posted 27/09/2011 - 12:24 Link
I like the angle of the building, great work again from you Axel. Cheers Trixie
timbo
Posted 27/09/2011 - 12:32 Link
Very imposing, great image.
Did you deliberately leave in that little white window near the bottom left of the image?
Dodge69
Posted 27/09/2011 - 21:20 Link
Good title.
Yeah the vignette effect has detracted, the darkness, I'm not sure depends on the mood you want to give it, though I suppose it would look punchier if brighter.
Interesting image, love the creation.
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szgabor
Posted 28/09/2011 - 06:14 Link
timbo wrote:
Very imposing, great image.
Did you deliberately leave in that little white window near the bottom left of the image?
Nice shot with good colours. I especially like that white window, because that brakes the monotony of the surface of the building.
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Gábor
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Stoupaduck
Posted 29/09/2011 - 23:22 Link
...might be interesting with the window appearing to have a light on?
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