A different take on autumn.

by davidwozhere

Thought I'd look at the soggy side !
Uploaded14/12/2023 - 23:05
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Aperturef/6.3
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Focal Length300mm
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Flan
Posted 15/12/2023 - 00:36 Link
I hope that you do not mind Davidwoz, my critique that follows
A fraction more dept of field perhaps just to tie the other two stalks left of the one that is in focus to complete the curved composition.
`everything else is perfect, colour etc
I will hide now for a while, when I get my coat
GIULIO57
Posted 15/12/2023 - 04:32 Link
Original
PPG
Posted 15/12/2023 - 07:18 Link
Flan wrote:
I hope that you do not mind Davidwoz, my critique that follows
A fraction more dept of field perhaps just to tie the other two stalks left of the one that is in focus to complete the curved composition.
`everything else is perfect, colour etc
I will hide now for a while, when I get my coat

I think this is so full of colour and the butterfly patterns the ripples have produced are amazing. However I agree with Flan the stems in the foreground do dominate the image a little too much. It's still an image to grab your attention though.
Edited by davidrobinson: 15/12/2023 - 07:20
davidwozhere
Posted 15/12/2023 - 23:31 Link
Excellent point. I was too fixated on getting the focus on the long stem and negating everything else that would compete. It's also good that people to take the time to make such comments as they are useful. "Lovely shot .... etc." is very nice (and polite) but you don't learn how to improve it.
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leep
Posted 17/12/2023 - 14:00 Link
I like that long stem. For me' perhaps a 1:1 crop.
LennyBloke
Posted 17/12/2023 - 15:24 Link
GIULIO57 wrote:
Original

+1

I like it when the gallery doesn't just have a procession of classic shots - Nice spot
LennyBloke
Edited by LennyBloke: 17/12/2023 - 15:24
tommyt
Posted 17/12/2023 - 16:17 Link
Works for me.

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