3rd attempt


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close but no cigar, i dont know how to make it look not fake.
03/03/2012 - 21:51BMurray
CategoryPortraits / People
Shutter Speed1/60
Aperturef/4.5
LensN/A
ISO400
Focal Length115mm
Views/Likes85/0
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senn

Link Posted 03/03/2012 - 22:12
now that's great !, .., I think it was worth to persevere
must be viewed large, .. it's sublime
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PentaxQueen

Link Posted 03/03/2012 - 23:00
to me she looks sad or depressed but other then that this is a nice shot.
personally would of had her smirk or smile some with her eyes or something

senn

Link Posted 03/03/2012 - 23:13
PentaxQueen wrote:
to me she looks sad or depressed but other then that this is a nice shot.
personally would of had her smirk or smile some with her eyes or something

jealous of her !? ..
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Last Edited by senn on 03/03/2012 - 23:37

VonBatCat

Link Posted 03/03/2012 - 23:19
Thats a great deal better. Well done. The resolution on this site isnt the best but shows much better. Great improvement.
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nonur

Link Posted 04/03/2012 - 06:54
A good shot, and a mysterious portrait.
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sandinista

Link Posted 04/03/2012 - 09:12
I think you've nailed it this time, very sultry looking model
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sam-joseph

Link Posted 04/03/2012 - 09:33
You've done well with this one, but she can be a handfull. Just look at the serious expression.

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pauljay

Link Posted 04/03/2012 - 18:24
This woman is driving me mad!
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szgabor

Link Posted 07/03/2012 - 06:20
Great improvement. You've done a great job and the result is perfect.
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