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by hasky
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Posted 15/03/2010 - 10:00
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No I don't think it is, Tim. It's a lovely pose and a sweet looking girl but the fussy blouse, eye make-up and lashes would make me want to reshoot this.
Andrew
Andrew
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Andrew
"These places mean something and it's the job of a photographer to figure-out what the hell it is."
Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
My website: http://www.ephotozine.com/user/bwlchmawr-199050
http://s927.photobucket.com/home/ADC3440/index
https://www.flickr.com/photos/78898196@N05
Posted 15/03/2010 - 18:02
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I have to agree with Andrew on this one. The pose and composition is good though.
Not everything in life is Black & White, If only it were!
Kind Regards,
Rees
Kind Regards,
Rees
Posted 15/03/2010 - 19:01
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I have to agree with all the above but I'm glad even you have your off days
Lighting is spot on and the pose is a classic
The make up is all wrong she has stopped at the cheek and the hands are too pale in comparison to the face.
James
make up tip
foundation should be the same colour as the neck but as their is little neck in the shot the hands should be the same colour.
Lighting is spot on and the pose is a classic
The make up is all wrong she has stopped at the cheek and the hands are too pale in comparison to the face.
James
make up tip
foundation should be the same colour as the neck but as their is little neck in the shot the hands should be the same colour.
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Great light and like the pose and background. Makeup looks a little heavy around her eyebrow and forehead, but that's probably just me.
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