Windermere on Monday

andyvarney
Posted 07/01/2010 - 15:43 Link
I grabbed these on my way back from Keswick on Monday. I would apreciate any c&c as they are virtually straight out of the camera.

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/BOATMISTLOWWOOD.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/CANNONLOWWOOD.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/SWANLOWWOOD.jpg[/IMG]

Andy
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K10D
Posted 07/01/2010 - 16:46 Link
All three are good captures. I see No 1 in Sepia to add a little time?

Regards
Too far from a shore.
Posted 07/01/2010 - 17:05 Link
I love them all, but I think number two would be my favourite if you use distort in photoshop to make the jetty perfectly central.

Kind regards

Andrew
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Father Ted
Posted 07/01/2010 - 21:13 Link
I like them all, but number two is my favourite. I can live with the jetty being slightly off centre, but I'd crop a bit of the sky away, to move the mountains up the frame a bit ( IMHO )
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andyvarney
Posted 08/01/2010 - 10:54 Link
Yes the non central jetty winds me up a bit but I am an engineer by training! I'll have a go at those suggestions and re - post to see what people think.

Keep the comments coming!

Andy
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andyvarney
Posted 08/01/2010 - 12:01 Link
What do people think of these adjustments?

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/BOATMISTLOWWOODSEPIA.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/CANNONLOWWOODCROP.jpg[/IMG]

Cheers,
Andy
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bforbes
Posted 08/01/2010 - 12:05 Link
I think both are more pleasing than the originals.
Technoblurb
Posted 08/01/2010 - 12:34 Link
I really like the changes to your boat in the mist shot, the mountains have more presence. However I preferred the first version of the Cannon on wood image, the graduated sky compliments with the reflection in the water.
pink
Posted 08/01/2010 - 12:48 Link
I like, they all Great shots Braver then me.

I think of it this way

Camera bag on my back

Slip and fall over all my camera gear broken (not worth getting out for that one or two great shots)

James
Edited by pink: 08/01/2010 - 13:05
thoughton
Posted 08/01/2010 - 13:57 Link
Love the pier shot, but I also prefer the original crop (even though I didn't like the off-center-ness of it). It's a shame to crop out the darker blue sky.
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Posted 08/01/2010 - 14:02 Link
I prefer the original version of image 2, but I still feel it needs to be made central. I am happy to have a go for you with your permission?
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andyvarney
Posted 11/01/2010 - 09:40 Link
Yes please, edit away!

Andy
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i-Berg
Posted 11/01/2010 - 10:02 Link
Andy,

I like the 2nd crop of the pier and cannon, not for the centred look as much, but because the streaks of cloud / contrails in the sky drew my eye away from the vanishing point created by the pier. Mind you, it could be removed fairly easily with clone / heal etc in any of the popular apps (with RAW or jpgs). That way, the 'big' sky could be reintroduced if you wished.
RichardDay
Posted 11/01/2010 - 12:30 Link
They are really nice shots, but being critical, number 1 needs levelling and number 2 needs distortion correction (the barrel distortion shows up badly on the planks in the bottom of the shot). Number 3 is also not level.

Like Andy (above) I prefer the original number 2 "big sky". Just crop the right edge and distortion correct, never mind the format ratio change.
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Edited by RichardDay: 11/01/2010 - 12:51
andyvarney
Posted 11/01/2010 - 14:46 Link
Richard,

That's great, thank you - how do these look?

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/BOATMISTLOWWOODSEPIAmodded.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/CANNONLOWWOODCROPmodded.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/CANNONLOWWOODmodded.jpg[/IMG]

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v48/avarney/SWANLOWWOODmodded.jpg[/IMG]

Best wishes,
Andy
It's not the size of the dog in the fight, but the size of the fight in the dog!

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