Waiting for mum...

trickletreat
Posted 12/08/2011 - 13:12 Link
Where's mum..

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP2117.jpg[/IMG]


patience rewarded...

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP2118.jpg[/IMG]


pleased to see you

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP2119.jpg[/IMG]


...and a couple while she was waiting...

[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP2133.jpg[/IMG]


[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP2136.jpg[/IMG]


Interested in your comments and improvements,

Nigel
ReklawyksEkul
Posted 12/08/2011 - 15:03 Link
i like the last one, great pose and sharp picture

is the first picture was cropped? In my opinion maybe the crop was too tight, or maybe a wider focal length?

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bwlchmawr
Posted 12/08/2011 - 15:14 Link
Nice poses but I might have made the monoshots a little lighter, to my mind they seem a bit gloomy and flat.
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trickletreat
Posted 12/08/2011 - 15:35 Link
Thanks for the comments folks, I do struggle with skin tones in black and white, and tend to go the darker route, I will have to have a play with pp. Many thanks, I am really impressed with the sharpness of this little secondhand 28mm.

Nigel
Edited by trickletreat: 12/08/2011 - 15:36
Smeggypants
Posted 12/08/2011 - 16:33 Link
I would up the contrast a bit on the mono shots
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trickletreat
Posted 12/08/2011 - 20:48 Link
Well I have tried to lighten, and treat a few differently, crop, contrast etc, are these any better?


[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP2117-2.jpg[/IMG]


[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP2118-1.jpg[/IMG]


[IMG]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v425/inamini/IMGP2119-1.jpg[/IMG]

Nigel

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