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Posted 01/03/2011 - 12:31
cardiff_gareth wrote:
Nice, I like that, do you remember that old film with David Bowie called labyrinth.........
Nice, I like that, do you remember that old film with David Bowie called labyrinth.........
A strange film but very compelling cinematography
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Posted 02/03/2011 - 10:05
This would have even more impact with a square crop IMO, to give greater focus to the stair-well?
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Posted 02/03/2011 - 12:08
i-Berg wrote:
This would have even more impact with a square crop IMO, to give greater focus to the stair-well?
This would have even more impact with a square crop IMO, to give greater focus to the stair-well?
Thanks I will give that a go
Graham
Last Edited by Technoblurb on 02/03/2011 - 12:08
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Posted 02/03/2011 - 15:51
I think 10x8 as the stairwell is not square.
Nice shot!
Regards,
Dan
https://www.flickr.com/photos/honourabletyr/
Nice shot!
Regards,
Dan
https://www.flickr.com/photos/honourabletyr/
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Posted 02/03/2011 - 19:08
Tyr wrote:
I think 10x8 as the stairwell is not square.
Nice shot!
I think 10x8 as the stairwell is not square.
Nice shot!
Two versions to try
, I will give both a go and upload them, although it may take a few days due to the builders descending on my house tomorrow 
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Posted 06/03/2011 - 19:56
This is the same shot but cropped as suggested by Tyr & I-Berg, more feedback is welcome
Graham
Square
10 x 8
And this is the second one in the series
Graham
Square
10 x 8
And this is the second one in the series
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Posted 06/03/2011 - 20:29
Baltic III
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Posted 06/03/2011 - 22:04
marklj wrote:
I like the angle of the second one in the series. I think the fact that it doesn't seem to have regular angles is helped by the different angle of the shot.
I like the angle of the second one in the series. I think the fact that it doesn't seem to have regular angles is helped by the different angle of the shot.
Thanks Mark.
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Posted 06/03/2011 - 22:18
I like 'Baltic III' the best. Although it's a fraction Dark.
All the others need PPing to give them some depth IMO
Baltic III has depth. which could be enhanced by lightening the foreground edges a tad.
In terms of composition, the angled version entitled "And this is the second one in the series" is by far the best IMHO
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Lenses: Pentax DA 10-17mm ED(IF) Fish Eye, Pentax DA 14mm f/2.8, Sigma 17-70mm f/2.8, Pentax-A 28mm f/2.8, Sigma 30mm F1.4 EX DC, Pentax-A 50mm f/1.2, Pentax-A 50mm f/1.4, Pentax-FA 50mm f/1.4, Pentax-A 50mm f/1.7, Pentax DA* 50-135mm f/2.8, Sigma 135-400mm APO DG, and more ..
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All the others need PPing to give them some depth IMO
Baltic III has depth. which could be enhanced by lightening the foreground edges a tad.
In terms of composition, the angled version entitled "And this is the second one in the series" is by far the best IMHO
[i]Bodies: 1x K-5IIs, 2x K-5, Sony TX-5, Nokia 808
Lenses: Pentax DA 10-17mm ED(IF) Fish Eye, Pentax DA 14mm f/2.8, Sigma 17-70mm f/2.8, Pentax-A 28mm f/2.8, Sigma 30mm F1.4 EX DC, Pentax-A 50mm f/1.2, Pentax-A 50mm f/1.4, Pentax-FA 50mm f/1.4, Pentax-A 50mm f/1.7, Pentax DA* 50-135mm f/2.8, Sigma 135-400mm APO DG, and more ..
Flash: AF-540FGZ, Vivitar 283
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Posted 07/03/2011 - 12:20
Smeggypants wrote:
Baltic III has depth. which could be enhanced by lightening the foreground edges a tad.
Baltic III has depth. which could be enhanced by lightening the foreground edges a tad.
Thanks Smeggy
I will re work this and see how it comes out, I did consider using colour popping on this image as the right hand wall is bright pink.
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Posted 07/03/2011 - 12:50
The two new ones are good. The angle on the new show means you don't need to worry so much about crop. The last is a tad dark but still very good.
Regards,
Dan
https://www.flickr.com/photos/honourabletyr/
Regards,
Dan
https://www.flickr.com/photos/honourabletyr/
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Posted 07/03/2011 - 20:48
I have increased the brightness on Baltic III as suggested, any comments or still too dark?
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