Two Defenders

tyronet2000
Posted 09/10/2013 - 11:09 Link
An image taken at Bamburgh to show ancient, the castle, and modern, the concrete blocks, means of defence. C & C's please

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Stan

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Mike-P
Posted 09/10/2013 - 12:10 - Helpful Comment Link
May be my laptop but the castle is a bit dark, needs a lift in the shadows so we can see some detail.
swarf
Posted 09/10/2013 - 12:14 - Helpful Comment Link
Mike-P wrote:
May be my laptop but the castle is a bit dark, needs a lift in the shadows so we can see some detail.
Ditto for me as well. Can you also go for a bit more contrast in the sky.

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wvbarnes
Posted 09/10/2013 - 12:16 - Helpful Comment Link
Hi Stan,

Nice composition of this heavily photographed landmark. Wonderful area isn't it?

Detail looks fine on my desktop IPS monitor as much as you can tell at this size. The hint of sun rays through clouds would have been nice a bit stronger. I assume you had it well stopped down for the depth of field on display.
Mongoose
Posted 09/10/2013 - 12:43 Link
it says something about me that I was expecting two Land Rovers lol

I like this, and I like the castle looking dark and forbidding. B&W works really well here too.
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but it does help
Gwyn
Posted 09/10/2013 - 13:03 - Helpful Comment Link
I like it a lot. very dark and foreboding.
Can you remove the dust spot by the castle though please?
Algernon
Posted 09/10/2013 - 13:12 Link
I bet a photographer put them there to rest his camera on!

I like the composition even though the vertical of the concrete
is a bit too central for me.

It looks better against the dark background when you click on it.
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tyronet2000
Posted 09/10/2013 - 13:19 Link
Hi Mike, Phil and Bill. Thanks for the feedback. I think the castle lacks detail too and will see what I can do (selected curve ? ) When the raw image is viewed at 100% the detail is there, can see through the arch way, that white dot in the middle of the castle Will try and get more contrast in the sky and enhance the sunrays. Good thing about digital it's non destructive
Failing all else, I only live an hour away from Bamburgh so perhaps can pick a better day to go and shoot it again. Some wit (well a half anyway) has painted the two furthest away blocks as a pair of dice so an exercise in cloning needed too

I should have said the exif says K5 16-45mm@38mm f/16 1/50sec ISO 100
Regards
Stan

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tyronet2000
Posted 09/10/2013 - 13:42 Link
Mongoose wrote:
it says something about me that I was expecting two Land Rovers lol
I like this, and I like the castle looking dark and forbidding. B&W works really well here too.
Thanks for the kind comment. I thought most people would have thought footballers

Gwyn wrote:
I like it a lot. very dark and foreboding.
Can you remove the dust spot by the castle though please?
Arrrrrrg it's floating there like a Zeppelin how did I miss it.
thanks for the kind comment too

Algernon wrote:
I bet a photographer put them there to rest his camera on!
I like the composition even though the vertical of the concrete
is a bit too central for me.
It looks better against the dark background when you click on it.
Next visit maybe I'll be able to try a different pov, less blocks ?
Only use off white/cream mounts now It does look better in a black frame though
Regards
Stan

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