Top of St. Michael's Mount

mattcambs
Posted 28/01/2010 - 13:32 Link
Hi All,

I took this at from the roof of the castle on St. Michael's Mount last week whilst in holiday.

There's something about this image that I love, but there isn't really a strong focal point in it. I wondered what you guys thought?

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Matt

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KenH
Posted 28/01/2010 - 13:47 Link
The textures and shapes are lovely, and shadows are also excellent - it's made for B&W!
One small negative is that the cropped chimney irks just a little
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mattcambs
Posted 28/01/2010 - 14:22 Link
re. the chimney: yes I deserve a slap for cropping that out
Thanks for the positive comments.

p.s. did you spot the sun-dial on the wall?
Matt

GX20; DA 17-70 F4; 18-55 kit; Ricoh 50mm F2; Vivitar 75-205mm F3.8
Edited by mattcambs: 28/01/2010 - 14:22
CoDa
Posted 28/01/2010 - 14:23 Link
I agree
Colin

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KenH
Posted 28/01/2010 - 14:56 Link
mattcambs wrote:
re. the chimney: yes I deserve a slap for cropping that out
Thanks for the positive comments.

p.s. did you spot the sun-dial on the wall?
didn't until you mentioned it, and then it took me a while lol
Photography is putting one’s head, one’s eye, and one’s heart on the same axis. HCB
K20D and various stuff.
Edited by KenH: 28/01/2010 - 15:14
thoughton
Posted 28/01/2010 - 15:11 Link
Nice image Matt! I might be tempted to try and correct the perspective distortion a little and see how that works (it might help, it might not ). Lovely textures and sky!
Tim
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CoDa
Posted 28/01/2010 - 15:43 Link
That sun dial I missed
Colin

“Nobody made a greater mistake than he who did nothing because he could do only a little.”
Edmund Burke (1729 – 1797)


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mattcambs
Posted 28/01/2010 - 16:14 Link
thoughton wrote:
Nice image Matt! I might be tempted to try and correct the perspective distortion a little and see how that works (it might help, it might not ). Lovely textures and sky!
Thanks Tim. I have actually already corrected the barrel distortion a fair bit. I stopped where I did so as not to lose any more off the top. I'll re-visit via PS tonight, see how it looks
Matt

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