The Eildon Hills

alig
Posted 01/11/2010 - 22:35 Link
Thanks Al, Pauly, Andy, Gareth, techno, Gwyn and Stuey. Thanks for your honest opinions.

Aero wrote:
Where are you based, Alistair?
Hi Al, I'm from Hawick, but have now moved to just outside the small village of Denholm, just 5 miles from Hawick.


Thanks Pauly, I like what you've done to the sky, it's brought it out, a bit more contrast to it, I re-tried the image, and failed , not as good at getting the detail out as you. How did you achieve this, levels/curves/dodge & Burn? Curious...

Yes Pauly they were shot on RAW, it's all I use to be honest.

techno-terminator wrote:
in # 3 it seems to be there as a rather more solid 'cloud ' thing , it's thick and seems very solid - and somewhat out of keeping with the rest of the the picture.
I know where you're coming from, I had difficulty bringing out the mist evenly across the frame.


Gwyn wrote:
I think #3 would work better as a square crop. Then I really like it.
I'm quite partial to a square crop, so I re-jigged it below.

4.

[IMG]http://i336.photobucket.com/albums/n327/ali_graham13/The%20Eildon%20Hills/square-re-try.jpg[/IMG]

5. and in B&W

[IMG]http://i336.photobucket.com/albums/n327/ali_graham13/The%20Eildon%20Hills/BW-square-re-try.jpg[/IMG]

Are these better / worse / different?

Thanks again.
Cheers

Ali

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Aero
Posted 01/11/2010 - 23:34 Link
Number 5 works very well. I think the bright blue sky and mist are a bit dischordant, which is why I still prefer number 1. A day out of Hawick,as they say, is day wasted.

Al
alig
Posted 02/11/2010 - 16:10 Link
Thanks Al

Aero wrote:
A day out of Hawick, as they say, is a day wasted.


Haha, it's so true though! Not heard this for a while.

Hawick folk... a different breed, lol.
Cheers

Ali

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paulyrichard
Posted 02/11/2010 - 16:40 Link
In your square crop it looks like you lose a lot of drama in that sky, and this image needs the full effect of that sky and it's space. After all, that's what makes this image work in my view.

I used the graduated filters, contrast and clarity sliders in Lightroom, for the processing of #3.
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paulgee20
Posted 02/11/2010 - 17:42 Link
No 1 without a DOUBT
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alig
Posted 02/11/2010 - 18:25 Link
Thanks for your honest comments and your advice Pauly, will try all that in Lightroom. Will need more practice.

Thanks also Paul.
Cheers

Ali

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bwlchmawr
Posted 02/11/2010 - 19:52 Link
Lovely stylish images, particularly the first one.
Best wishes,

Andrew

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i-Berg
Posted 03/11/2010 - 06:19 Link
1 and 2 are very good - I can see what Pauly was doing too, and why. That's improved No. 3, but 1 and 2 remain my personal favourites.

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