Sunset on the rocks
Posted 05/05/2010 - 20:56
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Good strong colours, spot on focussing and a fine composition, but the windmills bother me, and about 3 inches in from the left there`s a "bump" on the sea horizon, not sure what this is but it is a bit distracting. All in I think it`s a fine image, I would be pleased to have taken it.
Davex.
Davex.
Posted 05/05/2010 - 21:01
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davex wrote:
Good strong colours, spot on focussing and a fine composition, but the windmills bother me,
Yep, the windmills were bothering me, but I thought I'd say nothing and see what the feed back is. You've confirmed my gut instinct Nothing I can't clone out.Good strong colours, spot on focussing and a fine composition, but the windmills bother me,
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and about 3 inches in from the left there`s a "bump" on the sea horizon, not sure what this is but it is a bit distracting.
We need a smiley for DOH!, but I'll settle with It is an error with PP. I didn't spot it before I saved the image.and about 3 inches in from the left there`s a "bump" on the sea horizon, not sure what this is but it is a bit distracting.
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All in I think it`s a fine image, I would be pleased to have taken it.
Davex.
Thanks.
All in I think it`s a fine image, I would be pleased to have taken it.
Davex.
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Posted 05/05/2010 - 21:07
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I think I like it.
I don't mind the windmills. In fact I almost want them to be more visible, just to add a bit more mid ground interest.
Is the horizon straight?
I don't mind the windmills. In fact I almost want them to be more visible, just to add a bit more mid ground interest.
Is the horizon straight?
Posted 05/05/2010 - 21:16
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I think the windmills would have been a better subject option with that sunset and your 70-300mm, no?
Although, i'm guessing you never had use of a tripod judging by this image above and its shallow DOF?
Although, i'm guessing you never had use of a tripod judging by this image above and its shallow DOF?
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Posted 06/05/2010 - 08:31
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I actually didn't even consider making the windmills the subject. I did have my tripod with me, but this one was taken low down to the rocks and my tripod doesn't go that low. If I remember correctly, I think I rested the camera on a rock for support.
As for the horizon...I think it is, but I'll check.
You've given me some things to work on, and it's not far away so I can go back.
As for the horizon...I think it is, but I'll check.
You've given me some things to work on, and it's not far away so I can go back.
Getting there! Thanks to you guys
Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.
Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.
Posted 06/05/2010 - 09:15
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Certainly like the colours Fr Ted - both the sky and the foreground.
Posted 10/05/2010 - 20:53
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OK folks. I took on board your comments and re-did the PP. I couldn't go back and re-take the shot yet, so the windmills couldn't be made more prominent, so I cloned them out.
I sorted the "bump" and a few other errors ( how did I miss them first time ).
[IMG]http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Father_Ted/PHOTOS/Sunsetontherocks3upload.jpg[/IMG]
Another one I took on the same evening.
[IMG]http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Father_Ted/PHOTOS/NewBrightonLighthouse2upload.jpg[/IMG]
I sorted the "bump" and a few other errors ( how did I miss them first time ).
[IMG]http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Father_Ted/PHOTOS/Sunsetontherocks3upload.jpg[/IMG]
Another one I took on the same evening.
[IMG]http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Father_Ted/PHOTOS/NewBrightonLighthouse2upload.jpg[/IMG]
Getting there! Thanks to you guys
Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.
Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.
Posted 10/05/2010 - 21:00
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Crop the sea and sky off clone in a large Nautilus shell, convert it to B&W and you have an Edward Weston Masterpiece
Seriously though Ted, you have come a long way sine first joining this forum, just remember the tripod next time
Seriously though Ted, you have come a long way sine first joining this forum, just remember the tripod next time
Posted 11/05/2010 - 08:40
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fatspider wrote:
Crop the sea and sky off clone in a large Nautilus shell, convert it to B&W and you have an Edward Weston Masterpiece
Seriously though Ted, you have come a long way sine first joining this forum, just remember the tripod next time
Thanks. I had to go looking for Edward Weston...still got a long way to go before I reach that standard ( if ever! )Crop the sea and sky off clone in a large Nautilus shell, convert it to B&W and you have an Edward Weston Masterpiece
Seriously though Ted, you have come a long way sine first joining this forum, just remember the tripod next time
However far I've come since joining is soley down to the advice received on here.
Getting there! Thanks to you guys
Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.
Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.
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Here's one taken at New Brighton beach. I was hoping for an even more colourful sunset as it was during the last eruption of that un-pronouncable volcano in Iceland.
C&C welcome, as always
[IMG]http://i75.photobucket.com/albums/i296/Father_Ted/PHOTOS/Sunsetontherocks.jpg[/IMG]
Pentax K3ii, Pentax K10d, Kit lens ( 18-55mm ), 50mm f1.7 lens, Tamron 70-300mm lens, Prinzflex 70-162 manual lens, Various old flashes.