Stanhope Show 2014

bforbes
Posted 14/09/2014 - 13:38 Link
Yesterday was the camera club assignment day at this country show. I decided to try out some for some black and white images, so I'd love to get some feedback.

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davidstorm
Posted 14/09/2014 - 17:48 Link
Hi Barrie, I'll give it my best shot on feedback for these:

I think the most successful shot is the one of the fingers on the brass instrument, due to the graphic elements which tend to suit BW images. The second best is number two for me.

Number 1 and number 3 don't quite work for me, I think this is more due to the compositional element which doesn't look quite right. The last one would have worked very well, but is a bit out of focus and as a consequence I think it loses a little impact.

Hope this makes sense!

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David
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AndrewA
Posted 14/09/2014 - 18:53 Link
Really think the brass instrument is the stand out shot here Barrie.
Andrew

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davidtrout
Posted 14/09/2014 - 20:55 Link
The brass instrument player's fingers and the wrestling shots are my choice Barrie. They and the sheep have good quality punchy blacks and whites.
David

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womble
Posted 14/09/2014 - 22:52 Link
The lady playing the Eb bass is my favourite, but then I'm biased. K.
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Blythman
Posted 15/09/2014 - 08:06 Link
Hi Barrie, as has been said by others #4 is really good. How about this for #1

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tyronet2000
Posted 15/09/2014 - 11:19 Link
Nice Barrie, like the fingers on the instrument and Alan's crop
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Stan

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fritzthedog
Posted 15/09/2014 - 18:58 Link
Totally agree with everybody on the fingers on the bass shot. Also really like the portrait of the chap in the flat cap but it feels as if it needs taking down a shade and perhaps a contrast boost

Carl
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