Stalking in Newcastle
Posted 24/07/2010 - 11:01
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Go back there! I really like the set up.
No.1 is the pick for me. nice simple colours, overpowering pink slabbed out dominating. The figure mundanely pulling a trolley. The trolley the only pattern. Caught mid step arm and leg raised.
Though I like the others, 2 he perhaps needs a little more space to walk into, but he's following the damp line, nice. 3 he should be another step on. And 4, the hole is overpowering. perhaps a long crop might work.
I'm being hypercritical.
I'd be back there waiting for 4 men carrying a piano to walk past. You could get a whole series.
No.1 is the pick for me. nice simple colours, overpowering pink slabbed out dominating. The figure mundanely pulling a trolley. The trolley the only pattern. Caught mid step arm and leg raised.
Though I like the others, 2 he perhaps needs a little more space to walk into, but he's following the damp line, nice. 3 he should be another step on. And 4, the hole is overpowering. perhaps a long crop might work.
I'm being hypercritical.
I'd be back there waiting for 4 men carrying a piano to walk past. You could get a whole series.
Lurking is shirking.!
Posted 24/07/2010 - 12:54
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Yes, I like the first one, David. The door gives the girl something to move towatds. But the clashing colours are what makes it for me.
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Andrew
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Andrew
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Robert Adams
"The camera doesn't make a bit of difference. All of them can record what you are seeing. But, you have to SEE."
Ernst Hass
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Posted 24/07/2010 - 13:30
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You certainly found a good location for your captures. Good work!
Best regards
Terry
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Posted 24/07/2010 - 18:18
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Number 1 for me too. I'd crop the doorway on the left out though, to give it even more of a minimalist feel.
Love the crazy pinkness.
Love the crazy pinkness.
Posted 24/07/2010 - 18:51
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Great stuff David. I agree, 1 or 3 are both wonderfully minimalist and I would consider cloning or cropping out the door on both of them.
Tim
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Posted 24/07/2010 - 20:26
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I like the low angle perspective of number one and you must have been quick to get the leg and trolley at the same angle. Number three might have benefited from the odd step to separate him from the door. Now I like the door, it adds just the interest to a slab of plain colour.
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Posted 24/07/2010 - 20:31
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I'm still blinking at that shade of pink - it really has given such a shot in the arm to the photos.
They are so uncluttered and so effective
They are so uncluttered and so effective
let the education continue
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Posted 25/07/2010 - 09:33
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Thanks for your comments - No. 1 is my pick too. Barrie likes the doorway - and so do I for the same reason he gives and that's that's why I left it in.
I didn't get the titles on these pics when I uploaded them but No. 2 is called 'Exit Left' and that's why he's well across the frame, as if he's heading to that door.
Is that colour pink? I would call it magenta.
I didn't get the titles on these pics when I uploaded them but No. 2 is called 'Exit Left' and that's why he's well across the frame, as if he's heading to that door.
Is that colour pink? I would call it magenta.
Posted 25/07/2010 - 11:28
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My pick is the first. These photos remind me of my time in Mexico. Very Legoretta.
Posted 25/07/2010 - 11:33
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one and three for me.
Great location and composition though.
Great location and composition though.
Posted 25/07/2010 - 12:36
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I'll follow the crowd with this one and say I love number 1. I think the door should stay.
K.
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