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Seen at a wedding.

walkeja
Posted 03/12/2023 - 14:08 Link
I was feeling arty-farty, so I took this.
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Thanks for looking.
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Lubbyman
Posted 03/12/2023 - 20:03 Link
So there I was, expecting to see an embarrassing faux pas by the best man ...

I think I can see what you're going for, so a couple of hopefully constructive comments.
- My eye is drawn to the knot/top of the bow but sharpest focus seems to be at the bottom of the bow and foliage. I'd prefer the knot/top to be in focus so the eye isn't drawn in two directions.
- The light patch at top left with microphone (?) stands is rather distracting. Perhaps crop just below the brightest part?

Steve

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