River Dee at Dawn
Posted 21/08/2009 - 16:05
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looks good to me, but think I would tone down the light on the left as it pulls my eye away from the bridge.
Posted 21/08/2009 - 16:48
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Very nice indeed.
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Posted 21/08/2009 - 18:33
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Thanks Nielr for that comment - you are right it does draw the eye a tad, I will have to sort that out.
Cheers for the other comments chaps.
Cheers for the other comments chaps.
Posted 21/08/2009 - 20:16
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I wasn't keen on it till I seen it at full size great shot, but agree about the lamps on the left.
Posted 21/08/2009 - 20:30
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Bob, as said, the wet pavin' stones are nice in this shot.
I feel it would benefit from an 8x10 crop, croppin' out the right side, jus' after that tall tree.
A lot of that space on that side does nothin' for the shot IMO.
I feel it would benefit from an 8x10 crop, croppin' out the right side, jus' after that tall tree.
A lot of that space on that side does nothin' for the shot IMO.
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Posted 21/08/2009 - 21:29
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Very good point Pauly - as you are correct
Plus i've also got rid of the light at the left:
Plus i've also got rid of the light at the left:
Posted 21/08/2009 - 21:34
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Nice one, thats a much better balance.
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Posted 22/08/2009 - 02:31
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The shot is good for me nice blance...light refextion on the stones are great!
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I was fortunate in that the paving was wet - some lovely colour reflection.
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